This is so unrealistic even for a novel
She didn't? waste time, she took a fresh bath with warm water, this was the most peaceful bath she had taken ever since her mother passed away. She washed away her troubles and now she has found a new peace.
Urban · AphlineAmondi_1
She has a house and she slept outside ? Weird! She's a PhD holder with iota of self confidence and defense? Dumb.
She left her Private house, she had bought a house for herself when she first earned her money, and she didn't know this could help that much. So what if she was thrown out of the house? So what if she is no longer an Adam? She walked into a compound that she had never walked in before, but her house was full of an intelligent system.
Urban · AphlineAmondi_1
Please try to proofread your work. Also ensure you correct the name Phelicity not phelicity.
"Yes phelicity, you have done everything wrong, Why must it always be you? Why does Dad dote on you more than me? How long has it been since your mother's death? 9 years, but your dad, my father never treated my mother as a woman, All he can do is hang your mother's pictures everywhere, tell me is it fair? " Michelle has been brainwashed by her mother completely.
Urban · AphlineAmondi_1
Hmmm🤔 The title of this novel is so NOT it. I can't imagine a six year old saying that. What has the mum been teaching that child?
Not meant to hurt author, but the story sounds like a cut and paste from different books. It's not flowing like a novel/good novel should. Have to discontinue reading
Seriously ?😱🤦🏽♀️
"I meant what I said," Sophia hissed, pointing a finger at him. "I'll complain to your manager!"
Urban · black_flowertrend
He's taking advantage of a drunk woman again ?SMH
He leaned forward again, but this time, he kissed her earlobe and gently licked it. Then he whispered in her ear, "I don't need your money tonight. Happy?"
Urban · black_flowertrend
The descriptions above are a bit faulty .You can't be lying down practically drunk then have enough energy to 'slap' a HEAVY man and he staggers back.
Anthony was knocked backwards by the heavy blow and his head hit the corner of the table as he went down. Then he curled into a ball and whined, "Ah! What the fuck! How dare a bitch like you hit me?"
Urban · black_flowertrend
What was he doing with an heirloom in a hotel? Was the one night in his own home?
Six years ago, Alexander made the mistake of having a one-night stand with a strange woman. The following morning, he found that the family necklace had gone missing, and so did the mysterious woman.
Urban · black_flowertrend
So far, this story is not it at all. Not meant to hurt this author .But you need to do A LOT about this. I have to stop reading here. Thanks for the effort.
ONE NIGHT STAND: CEOs secret triplet babies
Urban · AphlineAmondi_1