Daoist240297

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Daoist240297
Daoist240297
2 years ago
Replied to JHeart

Thank you :) !

Daoist240297
Daoist240297
2 years ago
Commented

Wondering if there any plan to resume this novel. As much as I love your other novels, this was the first one and I’m looking forward to the story developing further. Thanks!

Daoist240297
Daoist240297
2 years ago
Commented

I thought she wasn’t head until died? And that was why she was killed?

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This Qu family's shopping mall was developed after Qu Meng'er accepted the Qu family's position as head. The design of this Qu family's shopping mall was confirmed after she personally saw it. "Why is there a Qu family's shopping mall in this space? Why didn't the bamboo slip left behind by the previous owner mention this matter?" 

Reincarnation: I Have Always Been Rich

Reincarnation: I Have Always Been Rich

Urban · Ai Guo

Daoist240297
Daoist240297
2 years ago
Commented

Ah…. I hope Torin rips him to shreds….

And at that moment, a voice Zariah had never thought she would ever hear again roared through her mind... the voice of Torin, Zariah's wolf.

The Alpha King's Nemesis

The Alpha King's Nemesis

Fantasy · JHeart

Daoist240297
Daoist240297
3 years ago
Replied to zeptaras

16? Feng Chuge(original) died at 10, FL replaced soul and lived for 6 yrs => FL's new age = 16

Moreover, the most ironic thing was that the real Feng Chuge, the first wife's eldest daughter of the Feng Family, died in the wild shortly after she was expelled from the house at the age of ten. The soul in her current body belonged to the number one killer from the 21st century.

Long Live the Mad Wife!

Long Live the Mad Wife!

General · Charming and Enchanting

Daoist240297
Daoist240297
3 years ago
Replied to DaoistDFmEaR

Agree that it might be boring If they met each other early but that does not change stuff. Right until FL lost her phone, she was able to go online and see posts and such. And when the reason for plotline is just "because this would be boring " and no other reason, its just bad writing. If the parents were picked up first because they are on the way, then why isn't it told. Adding enough motivation and background to worry would make this clearer.

Daoist240297
Daoist240297
3 years ago
Replied to ccamillia

Thank you for the review, will steer clear of this one. This is the kind of review that i always look for.

Daoist240297
Daoist240297
3 years ago
Posted

If you want to read a good apocalyptic novel, there are far better options. This book has several major issues and plotholes. 1. Plot: World building is minimal. The space is a catch all and isn't well described. The zombification isn't given enough detail. Does a zombie scratch make you a zombie? How do you kill a zombie? Are they slow/fast/blind or can they smell you? Zilch.Zip. Nada. Nothing at all. 2. Characters : All characters seem very one dimensional. FL: Ditzy at worst, naive at best. I am surprised that she doesn't try to check in with her parents and husband daily in an apocalypse. I feel like throttling her. If you lived away from parents/SO in the early days of the lockdown, you can probably relate. I assume that a zombie apocalypse woud be a thousand times worse. ML: ML sets out to rescue his wife, and ends up picking up her parents, and even random strangers before getting to her house. Even if they aren't close, this is pretty weird. 😒😒 Alternate suggestions if you like this genre: Coming of the apocalypse queen: on your knees young emperor Rebirth of the apocalypse queen

Daoist240297
Daoist240297
3 years ago
Commented

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"Shi Jin, Fu Xiuyuan is too much! How could he keep disregarding your wishes and forcing you? He is even forcing you to marry him today! Give me your ID and documents for safekeeping. If you really become his lawful wife, you will have a hard time divorcing him!"

Young Master Fu’s Incredible Real Heiress

Young Master Fu’s Incredible Real Heiress

Urban · Sweet Sago

Daoist240297
Daoist240297
3 years ago
Replied to Bookworm_123

Its actully true. High prolonged fever can damage the cochlea leading to hearing loss

She wasn't joking. The night when the original Mu Jingzhe had been thinking about ways to make love to Shao Qiyang, Shao Qihai's only daughter, Shao Bei, had gone deaf due to a high fever.

Transmigrating to the 80s to Become Stepmom to Five Bigwigs

Transmigrating to the 80s to Become Stepmom to Five Bigwigs

Urban · Yearly Blossoms