Ay that do be a question. At least 1 of those was answered kinda, the other a spoiler fo' future
ay no problem, I know the feeling. But as long as you keep up, I'm sure you'll be rewarded for your efforts. And worst case scenario you have something to look back on, a tangible read that you can remind yourself that you wrote, in the future. Even if it doesn't pick up, just remember whether you like it or not, the difference in whether you're hoping to make this a profession, or if it's just a hobby. Either way, you're selling it to an audience, but an audience will always be there for it, MTl exists after all. But your story's better than that. It's just a matter of quelling the darker thoughts and pushing onwards to a brighter day. At the very least if you write once per week, eventually it may pay off. I've found novels struggle in the first phase, and only after getting around 100 chapters do people finally decide to give it a chance at all. People are gluttenous for binge reading after all. Either way best of luck, as long as your minds at ease for whatever path u choose.
I do indeed
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I think an l (L) was cut off from the word like?
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Fantasy · Shameless_saint
These flames antagonise the soul, inflicting an intense pain? Or high levels of pain?Idk, that fullstop tho
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Fantasy · Shameless_saint
am instead of I'm. Some auto correct occurred me thinks
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Fantasy · Shameless_saint
Twould be an interesting development fo' sure
Nevertheless, he was not that same boy. He could see through the memories of contempt he held, the moments where his sister reached out her hand to him, only for him to push it away. Moments where she left herself vulnerable to him, confiding in despite the way he treated her, at times when she was overwhelmed by the expectations people held of her.
Fantasy · AlModem
Fair enough, I'm still on the fence about it myself. Kinda may have perfered if Warlock of Magus World had more focus on some relationships, but Reverend Insanity was certainly better without it since it still focused on characters enough. But as I'm finding out, perhaps the villain demographic may be better recieved if there was no romance. For now the idea remains, but it's a vacent option to be thought of in the future. I'll have to come back by the end of volume 1 and confirm whether I've decided to add it or not. There shouldn't be much of it until then though
10 day break doe, will u continue this? :o
Deleted my old comment to narrow it down and provide more relevant information, but I'll summarise it here: He'll have lustful encounters, though they'll be few as it isn't a focus. I don't like protagonists that are too timid to act on their desires after all. In regards to romance? Relationships and character dynamics are a focus of the novel, but outside of some necessary relationships for the sake of his schemes, true romance probably won't align with his goals. Also a correction for weekly chaps: It be 3 chaps/week now - Monday, Wednesday and Friday. Will increase in the future.
Isekai Maniac: Villain in Another World
Fantasy · AlModem