Ha_Sum

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2019-11-23 Beigetreten Global
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Ha_Sum
3 years ago
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It's dragging. We're at chapter 270 and there is no development in character or story. Except the brother, who is supposed to be just an extra. Not even a second-lead. But there is so much emphasis on him. Anyways, starting to loose interest. Yu Mei supposed to be fierce ans smart. But she is not acting like one. She is the usual innocent naive white lotus female lead whom start to be quite boring and doesn't think before acting.

Ha_Sum
Ha_Sum
3 years ago
Commented

Also, is it me or there is a shorter version of this exact same novel in Wattpad?

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Ha_Sum
3 years ago
Commented

Totally agreed with Rose's reaction. When Rose got msg from Jack, Kayla was so curious and upset that Rose is hiding something. Look who's hypoticrital. I would be as upset as Rose. There must be honesty both ways in friendship, especially when labeled as best friends.

Ha_Sum
Ha_Sum
3 years ago
Commented

Interesting but needs major proofreading. The translation is pooly done. Clearly English is not their first language. Because of the poorly translated story, it's very distracting. Lost interest after 3 chapters.

Ha_Sum
Ha_Sum
3 years ago
Commented

hmmmm sometimes, the author writes that they are in Paris and sometimes in Zurich. we all know that Paris is in France for Fashion week. But Zurich is in Switzerland and yet the ML speaks Swedish at the restaurant....confusing

Ha_Sum
Ha_Sum
3 years ago
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The ending was rushed and seems incomplete with a lot of loose ends. A lot of the different characters didn't get their closure. Let's hope for a 2nd volume 🤞🏻🤞🏻🤞🏻

Ha_Sum
Ha_Sum
3 years ago
Commented

Please take care of yourself 🙏🏻 The story is captivating. But your health is more important

Ha_Sum
Ha_Sum
3 years ago
Commented

Conversations repeat themselves a lot. The story doesn't evolve much. It's repetitive and losing the readers' interest. Besides, there are many typo and grammar errors. Need proofreading.

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Ha_Sum
Ha_Sum
3 years ago
Replied to LiLhyz

started it yesterday, it's pretty addictive. love the humor