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Toobo
5 days ago
Replied to imthi_a

Thank you for reading the whole story and leaving comments. I really appreciate it 🙏 yeah many things are left ‘it could be this or that’ but they are mostly left as such intentionally, I do like things to stay as ‘open to interpretations’ 😆 but anyways, thank you again

Toobo
Toobo
5 days ago
Replied to user123_4

Thank you 🙏 yes the series has finished and I’m pretty sure most people will be happy with the ending 😆

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Toobo
Toobo
14 days ago
Replied to yami_die_bestie

This gif is hilarious 😂 thank you

Meanwhile, I went on a killing spree with my newfound weapon of doom. 

The World Will End and I Couldn't Care Less

The World Will End and I Couldn't Care Less

LGBT+ · Toobo

Toobo
Toobo
20 days ago
Replied to Ikechukwu_3388

Lol alt.

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Toobo
20 days ago
Replied to The_Book_Critic

Now that it’s confirmed you’ve seen the message i will delete for you. You have been found out and you know it. The cringing shame is for you to feel, not for others to see 🙃

Toobo
Toobo
20 days ago
Posted

It’s my first Omegaverse book ever and I have to say it was certainly an interesting start. The main thing I want to say is the use of perspective switching, which is the strongest point in the early chapters of the novel. It provides both perception and deception, insight and misrepresentation - it lets the readers gain insight into character’s mind while also restricting their perception of the events at the same time. Because this alternation is done constantly, the readers don’t only get to find out what a character is thinking, but are placed in the position of constantly guessing and imagining what the other character must be thinking right now when the action is taking place. This also creates a constant element of humor as readers know that sometimes things are not what they seem to the character who’s narrating it. Characterization is nicely done within this context, with plenty of contrasts and subversion of expected roles. For example, Leo being an Omega makes for an interesting character as his work life and cold attitude contrasts with his submission in bed, and the same can be said for Erwin the other protagonist. The only thing I would nitpick is ‘language’ category of the review, where there are some obvious typos that stand out. I didn’t mind the first person present form narration with rather simple and direct writing style, but the language department certainly does improve and get more intricate very quickly after a few chapters, for the benefit of the book’s quality. Overall, it was a good start of the book and I would recommend it to anyone to give it a go, even for someone who’s never read anything from this genre. Good work, author-san!

Toobo
Toobo
20 days ago
Replied to The_Book_Critic

Give it up 😂 i refreshed and also went through ur other comments where you left simiarly generic reviews to other books without reading. I will just leave this here so stop embarassing yourself. I have received proper ‘brutal’ reviews before from people who actually read the book and hated it, and I appreciate such reviews. You are just level 1 trolling 🙈 i will delete the thread for you later to save yourself from further shame. Have fun till then 👍

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Toobo
21 days ago
Replied to The_Book_Critic

Thank you for your brutally honest review without reading it 😆

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Toobo
22 days ago
Commented

Hi, Toobo here, author of ‘My Lady and I’. 😆 I would like to thank Seraphelki for mentioning my book title here. It’s an honor to make a cameo appearance in a book that I rate so highly, and to be inserted into the beautiful prose and sweet moment of Elua and Qat is definitely something. Thank you!

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