jimmy_choo

LV 11
2019-10-15 Beigetreten India
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jimmy_choo
jimmy_choo
11 months ago
Posted

Mc is not good person he is cruel so please add anti hero tag

jimmy_choo
jimmy_choo
11 months ago
Posted

Evil Mc Evil mc is not good for your story please make him atleast consider his uncle controlling a family person is considered evil that is why I said evil mc

jimmy_choo
jimmy_choo
11 months ago
Commented

Author don’t kill simba it makes mc useless who can’t even protect his family , mc doesn’t want to be king as mentioned in starting chapters

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jimmy_choo
jimmy_choo
jimmy_choo
1 years ago
Commented

Awesome👍👍👍👍 keep it up & upload daily regularly

jimmy_choo
jimmy_choo
jimmy_choo
jimmy_choo
1 years ago
Commented

Your novel is way better than many Marvel&DC fanfictions keep it up but decrease the cringe part introduce not so famous characters slowly take reference from GALL OF GAMMON & WRATH OF GAMMON DROM WATTPAD