SolAce

SolAce

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Commenting and writing are my hobbies. Also part of the grammar police, so beware ! :3

2019-10-11 Beigetreten Global
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SolAce
SolAce
2 years ago
Replied to Drakonous

Kudos…but with a lot of ‘whys’ I barely did anything

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SolAce
SolAce
2 years ago
Replied to Drakonous

No way you read it all again…. did you?

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SolAce
SolAce
2 years ago
Replied to Houraji

No problem, sorry I couldn’t read yours more…. time is literally sand rn

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Sin of Kin

Sin of Kin

Fantasy · Houraji

SolAce
SolAce
2 years ago
Commented

spewing* the white crystals….and piling* (almost like a compound verb after “by”) Or spewing* the white crystals from the grey cloudy sky, which* piled up

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Sin of Kin

Sin of Kin

Fantasy · Houraji

SolAce
SolAce
2 years ago
Commented

those spoke* of white* rather than “those were speak for white”

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Sin of Kin

Sin of Kin

Fantasy · Houraji

SolAce
SolAce
2 years ago
Commented

What I enjoyed about this side story is that the author decided to give a small treat of another story rather than making Tang Muxin have an epiphany and write…

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SolAce
SolAce
2 years ago
Commented

Author, you don’t even know how much I’ve grown attached to your characters…. Thank you for the happy ending! This is my favorite arc so far

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SolAce
SolAce
2 years ago
Commented

Not gonna lie, Kain is acting rather humble here. Does he respect Damien already?

A rowdy bang comes from a glass door, as Kain slowly approaches the doorway. "Oo! Damien, so glad you could make it to my humble estate on this ravishing afternoon," Kain exclaims in pleasantry, after opening the doorway.

The Hierarchy of High Bridge Academy

The Hierarchy of High Bridge Academy

Fantasy · JacksNovels

SolAce
SolAce
2 years ago
Commented

Because behind that hideous figure lied a past that formed the current creature and a memory it wished to never disclose.* This is what I think you meant to say, and the reason for no comma is because you can reverse the latter part with the beginning. Ex) A past that formed the current creature and a memory it wished to never disclose lied behind that hideous figure.

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Sin of Kin

Sin of Kin

Fantasy · Houraji

SolAce
SolAce
2 years ago
Replied to Houraji

Doing alright, still drowning in studies

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Sin of Kin

Sin of Kin

Fantasy · Houraji

  • Memories Like a Dagger original

    Memories Like a Dagger

    Fantasy COMEDY TRAGEDY

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    “Hold fast to dreams, for if dreams die, life is like a broken-winged bird that cannot fly.” - Anonymous ... Kalani’s only unique aspect in life: being pecked daily by his bird, Whistle. Other than that, he was the average nature-loving boy and a mischievous prankster for his family, much to their dismay. However, the world with its kingdoms and tribes weren't as calm as life portrayed it to be. Dangerous undercurrents were roiling beneath the scenes, sucking in anyone who even touched the surface of it.  And with those dirty hands, ‘they’ snatched everything away from him, leaving him as only a shell of who he was before— a husk imprisoned deep underground. Until, he finally saw a light in his dreary world— in the form of a naive, optimistic girl. Far from perfect, she definitely frustrated him on many occasions, but the myriad of feelings he kept bottled up inside began to leak, and he couldn’t plug it. “Am I willing to risk everything for her? Or do I want to complete my objective...?” he would murmur to himself, emerald eyes glued onto her petite figure. … Update schedule: weekly Cover found on Pinterest; artist unknown ;~;

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