Yeah, it’s off putting that the guy exhausted himself and then woke up with a slave mark.
Don’t like the fact that the me has been forced into servitude. I don’t think this is the direction that the story should go.
Same
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Black Clover: The Chaos Legacy
Anime & Comics · xXShadow_MonarchXx
Nope, great pacing
A/n- Did I go too fast? I wanted to skip some of the training arcs and get into some big league stuff and also get close to Cannon, so it might seem like the past few chapters to be like that.
Black Clover: Nah I'd Lose
Anime & Comics · Desire96
+1
2. Crimson Lions
Black Clover: The Chaos Legacy
Anime & Comics · xXShadow_MonarchXx
Maybe take ideas from other fiction, but have him be a mage build that focuses around using knowledge to manipulate reality?
+1
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Black Clover: The Chaos Legacy
Anime & Comics · xXShadow_MonarchXx
NP, Great story tho!
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HP X LOTM : Please Call Me Mr. Error.
Book&Literature · Hooin_Kyoma
I thought he was publicly a sequence 8 combat scholar? While being a Prometheus
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Book&Literature · Hooin_Kyoma
Thanks for the chapter!
Requiem of the Pathways
Anime & Comics · VisionaryCipher