MariYan2020

MariYan2020

female LV 14

peaceful

2019-08-14 Beigetreten Global
Abzeichen 11

Moments 10
MariYan2020
MariYan2020
3 months ago
Commented

if names are in alphabetical order why is Scarlett an S instead of D?

MariYan2020
MariYan2020
4 months ago
Commented

really both MC & ML have the same First name? author is that un-inspired or too lazy to give separate name?

MariYan2020
MariYan2020
5 months ago
Replied to MariYan2020

he was 12 when she married his brother , her 2nd marriage to him doesn't happen till he is an adult.

MariYan2020
MariYan2020
6 months ago
Commented

What the hell!! isn't she supposed to know Taekwando?

MariYan2020
MariYan2020
3 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

MariYan2020
MariYan2020
3 years ago
Commented

I find the story interesting but there are loopholes in the plot that doesn't make sense. if she knew how to fight & be a strong character she wouldn't act cowardly in front of other people. why let those people run over u like that. not believable. the back story needs more details. no point in revenge if ur the one to let them walk over u like a coward u shown them.

MariYan2020
MariYan2020
4 years ago
Commented

are u sure he is 4 & not 14? he acts like a rebellious teenager!!!

[A/N: And what are you? You 4 years old brat!]

My Beloved

My Beloved

Urban · Flow07

MariYan2020
MariYan2020
4 years ago
Commented

incarnate should be incinerate means to burn it. please watch your language usage. you are still using taught instead of thought. rase is not a word. it should be race.

MariYan2020
MariYan2020
4 years ago
Commented

meat is animal food we eat MEET is to see someone or some things

Luckily the sea is clean and clear. So far they didn't meat any problems or dangerous animals.

She transmigrated and started different life

She transmigrated and started different life

History · JennyS

MariYan2020
MariYan2020
4 years ago
Commented

taught should be thought. that is to think. the word taught is to teach. please watch your grammar & verbiage. you have used it wrongly alot.

He taught the little girl is cute.Kendra looked at the two and shook her head. Will she lose her sister to this boy. Isaa is just four what is she thinking about.

She transmigrated and started different life

She transmigrated and started different life

History · JennyS