What terrible english. I'm guessing the rest of the novel will be written in a similar quality. The concept for the story is good, but I'm going to have to drop this novel before I get an aneurysm.
After spending another morning happily like this, Brian came to the cafeteria and looked at the burgers and sandwiches in the window with a very helpless expression. He could feel his stomach protesting, but skipping lunch would be harmful to the body. No, I have no choice but to go back and turn on a small stove at night.
Surviving The Last Of Us World
Video Games · kibishi718
Though, in their case, they would probably see the Earth, the sun, or the moon… which was not my case. I was in an empty void that seemed to be in the middle of space, with nothing but small stars around me.
Sussy Baka in MHA
Anime & Comics · The_Synonym
Already off to a bad start.
Location: Earth, County: Bangladesh.
Frieren: The Otherworlder.
Anime & Comics · Arnab_Panday
Just came by to say the cover art is cringe. Might read later.
Chapter 1: Being Dipper Pines has advantages
becoming Dipper in Gravity falls isn’t So bad ,is it??(rewriting)
Anime & Comics · Herohero
Dont use - . Use " for speech.
Dieses Buch wurde gelöscht.
It went up 🤨
Katsuki Bakugou; Motherfucker: -200 affection
MHA: Jaeger
Anime & Comics · B00BIES_for_life
Fantastic. Make him transform into an elf instead of a human though. Humans are lame.
So when does he turn into an elf? Humans are lame.
+1 on keeping just one name (Lacht). You also need to edit your chapters before posting. There are quite a few spelling mistakes and odd choice of words.
The regular pokeballs were for catching the diglets for the bounty right?
The thought of using a regular pokeball did cross my mind, but it would be mean to make her live in a cheap standard ball while everyone else gets something special.
Pokemon - Solo's Strange Journey
Video Games · BenisBoy14