Brenna_Kai

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2019-07-28 Beigetreten Global
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Brenna_Kai
Brenna_Kai
2 months ago
Posted

so the start is great, yet lost some shine as story progressed. our MC & her father are fairly capable at the start... sadly, their characters seems to mentally degrade in the later story. like to the point of outright stupid. especially in regards to her mom. our ML actually developed during the story. from arrogant narcissist to strong silent arrogance. I do like a lot of the side characters, even if they i felt they were abandoned by the story at the end. As they just seemed to be gone suddenly with no word on their end. even though after I lost interest in MC I stayed for them, & ML. I also felt the final about their daughter was unnecessary. more like it lacks depth & development as it could have been built into a full story separately. too many aspects they crammed together. it felt so forced... Anyway that's my 2 cents

Brenna_Kai
Brenna_Kai
5 months ago
Replied to Cherry_Pei

that's what I'm saying.... they knew his boss arranged miracle dr le che for her but don't think to call his boss when he is hurt... like for real!?!

With Father Xu's efforts to contact Elder Han proving fruitless, and the dire situation sinking in, a heavy cloud of despair settled over the hospital area. The area's once-sterile atmosphere was now filled with tension and anguish.

Transmigrated as Fat young missy

Transmigrated as Fat young missy

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Brenna_Kai
Brenna_Kai
7 months ago
Commented

lol he's a little simplistic but a good guy lol

As soon as Gu Yundong opened the door of the central room, she saw four black shadows in the middle of the courtyard. He looked closer and realized that they were four sacks.

The Farmer’s Eldest Daughter Has a Spatial Pocket

The Farmer’s Eldest Daughter Has a Spatial Pocket

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