Billy_Castellanos

Billy_Castellanos

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2019-07-11 Beigetreten Indonesia
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Billy_Castellanos
Billy_Castellanos
4 months ago
Replied to Knight_Might

The two brothers are OP. Look at Pallez. Even he couldnt hold a candle against Amon. The only character in this series that ever goes toe in toe with them is just Klein. And I believe it was mainly due to his thick plot armor. Klein shouldve been replaced already by CW if not for his plot armor.

"Step 5: Coordinate with the Tarot Club's Justice and Susie for treatment, reasonably allowing certain events to happen to aid in improving psychological conditions:

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

Billy_Castellanos
Billy_Castellanos
9 months ago
Replied to KopiCAT

But his earlier works have romance and even got it as main plot. Samsara, Throne Of Magical Arcana, and Martial Art Master. The third one basically a romance novel with action subplot. And it was exceptionally great, even far surpassing romance novel made from many female writers.

At this point, he smiled. "Moreover, I want to experience genuine pleasure."

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

Billy_Castellanos
Billy_Castellanos
9 months ago
Replied to zoekin

True. This book's translator deserve to be fired tbh. I can barely understood whats going on. They kept introducing new words and when I search them on google, it just mean so simple.

Billy_Castellanos
Billy_Castellanos
9 months ago
Posted

Whats wrong with the translation?! This is definitely the downgrade version of the first book! The french were already annoying enough, and you had the nerve to add alot of words that non-native speakers find them difficult to understand? It really broke the immersion and the talks between characters sounds awkward. And by the way, I found the style of translation somehow similiar to Chat GPT.

Billy_Castellanos
Billy_Castellanos
1 years ago
Posted

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Billy_Castellanos
Billy_Castellanos
1 years ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter

Billy_Castellanos
Billy_Castellanos
1 years ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter.

Billy_Castellanos
Billy_Castellanos
1 years ago
Posted

Coming here for the cliche, rather interesting premise. The writing quality is decent overall, but could benefit from some trimming of unnecessary or overly long paragraphs to allow readers to draw their own inferences. There were a few errors, such as misplaced pronouns, but they were relatively minor and likely to be corrected by the author upon my review. (Mind you, I'm not a native English speaker myself. So, I might be mistaken about the grammar, and you should just check it out yourself.) The story pacing may be slow, but not to the point of being boring. The author has gradually revealed information about the world throughout the 20 chapters so far, even though only three hours have passed in the novel's world. Although it's slower than some other novels, it's still better than those that fail to reveal any background information after several chapters. So far, the author has introduced us to two distinct entities for the system in the novel. One of them was a typical system, which functioned passively without the ability to communicate. The other was a genie, acting as a customer service representative for the system and assisting players when they experienced difficulties. The update rate was decent, with at least two chapters being released per day. While I don't have any issues with this aspect, I believe it would be even better if the author could release more chapters daily. P.S (I reserve the right to change my review after reading more chapters, so I encourage the author to maintain consistency in their work.)

Billy_Castellanos
Billy_Castellanos
1 years ago
Replied to Faechan

Its great to be honest. Like latin. But as far as I know, using strange characters / chinese/korean language are banned. I dont know about using special font, just be careful.

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Her Devil's Allure

Her Devil's Allure

Fantasy · Faechan

Billy_Castellanos
Billy_Castellanos
1 years ago
Commented

How do you write with this font?

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Her Devil's Allure

Her Devil's Allure

Fantasy · Faechan

  • The Elemental's System original

    The Elemental's System

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE SYSTEM MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG VIDEOGAME ACADEMY

    4.14

    Kael is supposedly lived his life normally. But before he was born, a tragedy took place on Earth. Meteorites abruptly descend from the sky, devastating the majority of the world. As if this were not enough, the animals begin to evolve uncontrollably into monsters. On the verge of despair, humanity suddenly found a light of hope. People with extraordinary powers emerges, and expel the monsters out of their lands. Kael Lys, born as a person with innate ability to control several elements. However, those powers were so trashed that his fire could only ignite a cigarette, water to flush his face, and electric that could charge his phone battery. Suddenly, on the same day he admitted as the Bintang Academy student, he received a mysterious message ringing inside his ears. [Assimilation is complete. The host will now begin to retain his memories.]

    28 Chs 787 Sammlungen

  • Master Of Sorcery original

    Master Of Sorcery

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG TRANSMIGRATION

    Harry was only a normal student with a pretty plain life. However, a bizarre occurrence befalls on him after he got backstabbed by a robber, resulting in him transmigrated into another world. Instead of finding his familiar appearance, Harry's sight was welcomed by a complete unrecognizable skinny-boy. From then onward, he came to know that he was actually possessing a boy's body named Exia Glide. As he explores the world further, he realizes the world he currently stayed wasn't as simple as it looks. It was a world filled with magic and monsters. Like every protagonist of the story he reads, he also bestowed by a magical thing. In his case, he was given a singular scarlet orb that kept revolving around his body. Determined to find the reason for him being transmigrated, Exia gradually makes his way from the lowest into the highest. From a boy that could do nothing, into a Master Of Sorcery. I don't own the cover, and would immediately change it if the artist wants me to do so.

    33 Chs 287 Sammlungen

  • Time Space User System original

    Time Space User System

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE SYSTEM MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG MYSTERY TRANSMIGRATION VIDEOGAME

    4.24

    [ ON LONG HIATUS ] Finding himself waking up in a strange body, Luke Lewis realizes that it isn't the end; in fact, it was the beginning of his story. Invasion, Ability, Advanced Technology are the things Luke found upon living as another Luke Lewis. By any chance, he is also bestowed by a mysterious system. With it, he leaped from a normal person into a Transcender. Would he, Luke Lewis, find the purpose of his existence in here? Follow Luke's journey as he ventured through the mysteries that clouded over his transmigration. (Note: Chapter 10-50 still in editing process. Some different with earlier chaps might be present) Buy me a coffee: https://ko-fi.com/billycastellanos

    74 Chs 2.9k Sammlungen

  • Dual Path Cultivation original

    Dual Path Cultivation

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE MYSTERY CULTIVATION

    A normal person Ze Yan transmigrated into the body of a boy named Mo Zhen in a different world where unbelievable things happen throughout time. Faced with a completely new world where people with different abilities exist, would he, as a newcomer managed to survive and adapt quite fast enough to attain a superpower? Follow Mo Zhen's adventures unsolving the mysteries that shrouding his life.

    6 Chs 38 Sammlungen

  • Purest Bloodline original

    Purest Bloodline

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG VAMPIRE EVOLUTION

    No one knows when people with unordinary power start appeared, but one thing for sure is that their ability source was from their bloodline. Vampire, Human, Elf, Dwarf, Demon had their own specialties. There are unwritten rules that each race wouldn't intervene on each matter. Lysa, a vampire that strangely woke up in a foreign place with no single memory. Would she find the way to her past and uncover the fog of mysteries that shrouded her mind? *I do not own the cover book*

    11 Chs 48 Sammlungen

  • Melee Mage original

    Melee Mage

    Games ACTION MAGIC VIDEOGAME

    Aldeia Online, a VRMMO that has been released recently. The most intriguing part of this game was : -No fixed level -No fixed job Here you can become anything as long you have succificent skill points. Our MC here had decided to be the most ridiculous job. MELEE MAGE. Mage which always considered as long-range job will become a melee-range job in our MC hands.

    2 Chs 6 Sammlungen

  • Two Dazzling Stars original

    Two Dazzling Stars

    Urban ROMANCE SWEETLOVE SUPERSTAR SHOWBIZ

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    4 Chs 6 Sammlungen

  • Star Of My Life original

    Star Of My Life

    Urban ROMANCE R18 SWEETLOVE SUPERSTAR

    "Why are you doing this Nathan?" Linda cried bitterly seeing the man in front of her intimately holding her sister. "Why? Its of course because we loved each other, right sweety?" He turned his head and kissed the girl beside him lovingly. The girl that has been kissed, lowers her head slightly to hide her smirk and said with apologetic tone but Linda can sense a mocking tone beneath it. "I'm sorry for hiding all of this sister. We both have loved each other for a long time." Linda wanted to cry badly, but her head start throbbing hardly. She then opened her eyes slowly, only to find herself staring at her own apartment ceiling. "What kind of dream is that?" She pinched her forehead then sighed. The cover isn't mine

    4 Chs 2 Sammlungen

  • A Way To Woo Your Heart original

    A Way To Woo Your Heart

    Fantasy ROMANCE SYSTEM SLICEOFLIFE BEAUTY

    Abgeschlossen

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    8 Chs 7 Sammlungen