MyKataren

MyKataren

female LV 13

Kataren, born 12/15/94. An English writer, lover of Chinese Light Novels. After reading till there wasn't anymore to read, decided to write her own. I'm a lazy perfectionist who talks too much. (꒪Д꒪)ノ

2019-04-10 Beigetreten United States
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MyKataren
MyKataren
MyKataren
1 years ago
Replied to chiiiii

Thank you, you saved me from powering through several chapters waiting for character development from the ML. I normally can handle the worst of the worst ML, but this one takes the cake. I could barely get past their meeting it was so bad. I was even pacing on each paragraph, picking apart how different it could be approached. I was quite literally close to tearing my hair out.

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MyKataren
MyKataren
1 years ago
Commented

Shishi-odoshi aka the bamboo water fountain. This is what it looks like.

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MyKataren
MyKataren
1 years ago
Replied to Ronni_Belle

I did a bit of research and my wording should be corrected. it's not good to forcefully sweat out a fever, but it's also not good to drastically change your body’s temperature. Unless it is an extremely high fever to requires medical treatment, you can simply wear lighter cloths, take a lukewarm bath, and go to bed with a light blanket (this is taking account that this is historical and not modern time where nearly everyone has a fever reducer). Due to the wording the author or translator chose, it was confusing to me on what they were going for, and it came out like youthful ignorance that didn't even bother to fully explain. There are many types of fevers with different variations on treatment level and just using one classification for them all, does not sound like what the author is trying portray her as. Someone who is knowledgeable in the medical arts. Be that as it may, as someone doesn't get enough fevers to be considered knowledgeable, I just found this to be an odd writing choice. Sorry for how lengthy this got.

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"No, you can't cover up someone who's running a fever," Murong Yu stated, changing the cold compress on Ji Chengxuan's forehead.

After My Rebirth, I Pampered the Villain Lord

After My Rebirth, I Pampered the Villain Lord

History · Brazilian Pine Nuts

MyKataren
MyKataren
1 years ago
Posted

Turn off your brains for this one my friends, it's historical but it kinda reads like a modern day novel. It's a nice casual read, but that's all it is so far.

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1 years ago
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On the way back, Murong Yu couldn't help but ponder, 'Why is Gu Zhihan, the eldest son of the Gu family, in the capital? And how had he suffered such grievous injuries while here?'

After My Rebirth, I Pampered the Villain Lord

After My Rebirth, I Pampered the Villain Lord

History · Brazilian Pine Nuts

MyKataren
MyKataren
1 years ago
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"He might have taken me hostage, but he did no harm. Even before fainting, he removed the dagger from my neck," Murong Yu said, disregarding their concerns as she stepped into the room.

After My Rebirth, I Pampered the Villain Lord

After My Rebirth, I Pampered the Villain Lord

History · Brazilian Pine Nuts

MyKataren
MyKataren
1 years ago
Commented

The more I read, the more I feel this is just a self insert novel.

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Murong Yu grinned, a bit embarrassed. She thought, 'Aman's tone when she curses was uncannily similar to mine. In my past life, even when Ji Chengxuan forced me into humiliating positions, I would call him shameless. Ji Chengxuan would laugh it off and say my cursing sounded like coquettishness. It irritates me even more, but he'd just laugh and roll around on the bed with me.'

After My Rebirth, I Pampered the Villain Lord

After My Rebirth, I Pampered the Villain Lord

History · Brazilian Pine Nuts

MyKataren
MyKataren
1 years ago
Commented

I'm pretty sure indecisive and lacks decisiveness are the same thing.

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"Xu Chang'an is a good person, and he does like you; I won't deny either of these facts," Murong Yu looked at Princess Anyang and continued, "But he is indecisive and lacks decisiveness. Do you think he can handle the conflicts between a mother-in-law and a daughter-in-law? He can't. He would only urge you to be magnanimous and to be filial to his mother. You might be willing to do so, but that doesn't change the fact that his mother has a twisted mentality."

After My Rebirth, I Pampered the Villain Lord

After My Rebirth, I Pampered the Villain Lord

History · Brazilian Pine Nuts

MyKataren
MyKataren
1 years ago
Commented

I do wonder what dynasty this takes place in, because if I remember correctly most if not all dynasties found it hard if not impossible for women to divorce, even if they were daughters of the emperor.

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When Princess Anyang learned of Murong Yu's situation, she immediately advised Murong Yu to divorce.

After My Rebirth, I Pampered the Villain Lord

After My Rebirth, I Pampered the Villain Lord

History · Brazilian Pine Nuts

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  • Mr Villain Please Go Away [Under Heavy Revison] original

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