General_Rain

Thanks for the chapter and good to see you back.

Thanks for the chapter but why ride lightning when you could have went the iron man route by using repulsor tech powered by speed force? Or go like the vulture with old school jet engines and wings charged by speed force instead? Even the Batman Beyond rocket boots with fixed glider type wings would work better than lightning to fly.

As much of a disappointment as Joffrey was I would not be too suprised if nobody but Cersei cared if the wizards pulled a Gilderoy Lockhart on Joffrey and shipped him off to be re-educated at Casterly Rock.

I just realised that with the cleaning spell scourgify that wizards could clean the barnacles off the bottom of any ship in the harbor in moments making them a good business and saving the customers the massive cost of clading the ship hulls with copper.

Welcome back!!! I love the new start so far. Poor Cedric Diggory just became the new minister of magic and lucked out big time by attending Hogwarts this year he effectively escaped the mountain of paper work that the missing school will create with him, Dumbledore, and Amelia Bones all disappearing together.

I found a typo. Viktor Krum is a famous quidditch "Seeker" like Harry Potter not a chaser.

Actually Hermione Granger's parents are both dentists it was the joke in the original story that she had large front teeth but could not get them fixed with magic as it might offend her parents.

Found a repeated typo Jane Foster's assistant is actually named Darcey Lewis not Daisy. Thanks for the story!

Actually Cedric, Fred, and George should be starting their third year at Hogwarts school when Harry Potter starts as a first year. Cedric Diggory was in his seventh year during the goblet of fire book when Harry was in his fourth year so there are two years till cannon starts.

I like the story so far but you tend to periodically put the wrong names in like with Mrs. Norris replacing Mr. Filch. If you double check the names before posting. If you are using a translator program you will cut down on a lot of mistakes if you translate each sentence individually and compare it to the version you get for each paragraph.