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PrinceNobody
I like the way it's going but I just don't understand how he can't have more rage in him. They literally replaced him in his own family then forced him to kill while manipulating his feelings. He's aware of this yet he goes on like he's just a normal dude getting used to life. And how he easily started talking and semi trusting people is just weird. Since He's mad and should be thinking of revenge not how to make friends 101. No offense btw just airing my opinion out.
PrinceNobody
Thanks for the chapter and keep up the good work!
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The Dawn of The New World
Eastern · shinigami8671
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original King of Strength
Amzi was a boy on earth that had a chain of accidents throughout his life. But when his life ended on earth it began in a different world. Watch as Amzi and his brother fights their way to the top *Updates may not be stable *Not my cover art6 Chs 2 Sammlungen
Looking forward to how this story is gonna work out. I hope it's gonna be as good or better than your previous story. And if u need some help with grammar I would be more than happy to help you.