Fabricio_Augusto

Fabricio_Augusto

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2019-02-28 Beigetreten Global
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Fabricio_Augusto
Fabricio_Augusto
4 years ago
Commented

the harem may or may not be good, which determines whether it is good or not, whether heroines are generic, which is not so far

Fabricio_Augusto
Fabricio_Augusto
4 years ago
Commented

akame is akame from akame ga kill or the continuation of the Hinowa ga chush manga

Fabricio_Augusto
Fabricio_Augusto
4 years ago
Commented

the second character is lucy de elfen lied isn't it?

Fabricio_Augusto
Fabricio_Augusto
4 years ago
Posted

at first I thought it would be just a cliché story but so far the story is very creative. the narrative also has a good quality which is good on this site

Fabricio_Augusto
Fabricio_Augusto
4 years ago
Commented

does not use this type of text source because the gogle translator cannot translate

Fabricio_Augusto
Fabricio_Augusto
4 years ago
Replied to dontenglish

it would be easier to guess who he is if he knew if he is only a female character or also has a male character

Fabricio_Augusto
Fabricio_Augusto
4 years ago
Commented

the prologue reveals a lot about the first character. mainly the part of the red eyes, since the name of this character is a play on words that means red eyes. but the other peraonages are a mystery to me so I would love a tip.

Fabricio_Augusto
Fabricio_Augusto
4 years ago
Commented

good writing above the average webnovel