SkyAboveTheSky

2 days no updates, from 2chap a day to barely 1 mmm

I lost interest long back due to many reasons, plot holes etc. so many better novels on royal road and kindle quality wise. Just reading this cuz it’s barely 2min a day

Why’re we getting just half chapters now? Might want to fix the updates so we get both 1 and 2 on same day ?

Don’t do drugs kids

Meh

Looks like AI generated chapters. Phrases like “heart full of justice” “eyes full of awe and gratitude” are something commonly seen in ChatGPT “it was legendary” is repeated twice in a row.

Again you’re portraying her as a dumb character, a rank 2 magus who needs analytical skills to form spell model and calm mind to be where she’s at, yet she is asking if Adam is accusing her family instead of reaching such conclusions herself. As expected from low quality Chinese clone novel

You’re portraying her as a stupid character, firstly she cares a lot about her father and finally found someone who can save him yet she has issues with her father being naked for medical reason which is very common. She is a rank 2 magus I would expect her to be not this stupid. Previously you mentioned her aura hinting she has experience with killings and such then this stupidness makes no sense Secondly her analysis, she’s asking Adam why would he willingly consume poison and if he is out of his mind. She can’t even process simple logic? Your character is very inconsistent, feels like just a filler to add value to Adam and write some bs nonsense, very typical Chinese level quality and you wonder why your readers count is reducing. Your readers are not stupid, some expect quality

Lame like those Chinese cultivation novel, but instead of cultivating its magic tho system is very similar to it. No character depth, no world building, below average quality writing, overall meh