Jerry070

I liked the chapters, but the way the chapters are conveyed is weird. Not bad, but weird, as the mc or any character feels like a poet singing to themselves their own thoughts, or any talk they do. Conversation doesn't look genuine. Feels like the MC is some aristocrat from ancient times who only knows to speak the way he is doing. That's the only thing I want to say. So, try to change or improve that. Just a suggestion, if it doesn't feel food then ignore it. Anyways, thanks for the chapter.

Quite easy to say "then leave" but hard to implement. You can't understand someone's situation if you aren't in it yourself. Desperate situation wouldn't give you time to think, "yeah I should do this". They come and f you up. The whole law and order that we have in governments is for this reason - it tooks years to build. And, MOST IMPORTANTLY it is made by taking every situation into accounts. ["Ghost rider" 's] stair in this, will leave them dead or paralyzed for life, for just small stealing which being a crime isn't worth killing someone. Taking a life or leaving someone paralyzed over a minor crime denies proportional justice and contradicts the purpose of a fair legal system - the same legal system which was made on moral codes, taking every situation into account.

Read before you say something, "not a criminal who kills innocent", didn't say she is not a criminal just that she doesn't kill innocents.

Also, ghost rider if I remember mostly go after worst of the worst criminals, so him doing this is really like giving trauma's going around. On thief his stare will even work is also not known. Most likely won't.

Lol, laws were created for this, if we started killing everyone then for example a person stealing food for his child or a small child stealing food for his infant brother or sister is a criminal too. Would you love to see them punished as well. Just as you said in last line. Just say you want to see ruthless mc, no need to argue with half thought logics like that. [P.S. Ghost rider's stare doesn't see things done for good or bad they see criminals and suffering they did. So, no the way you said can't work out in world such as dc.]

She is a thief not a criminal who kills innocent people so she wouldn't suffer much or might not even die if I remember dc good. Why use it on her? I might be wrong.

Take care, health is more important. Get well soon.

Yeah. Except for the way they are talking, everything else is good.

And, I didn't say they can't. I just said why they might hate her in context to anime. Anyways, whatever anyone says they can't deny that, if we ignore the comedy undertone of the anime then Rias might appear a little hate able for some.