LordSpecter3366

I add (?) for one person that the mc does not know who there name is, and add (??) for another person talking to know that it's not the same previous person the mc does not know is talking. it is quite organized, but if you feel like it's such a bad thing then go read the novels you like, I will not change my writing style and it's for all the readers to adapt to the writers style as everyone is not the same person, I make mistakes just as much as the next person. you are no different, this is my last message to you as I don't see the reason to argue with you about a chapter that can be read with a pinch of salt. enjoy reading, or not. I am not forcing anyone to read my novels, and writing is a pain. if you feel like it's so bad then go write your own novel with your own writing style, and even I will not go to your novel and say you suck at writing I will instead say you write really well and keep up the good work even if there are errors. hope you have a wonderful day.

yeah, not the prettiest first chapter, but it gets better along the way, it was lack of confidence when writing but when I was redoing the chapter I don't want to change much as it will effect further chapters, as for the (??) it is to help organize who is talking it is a different person talking and not having (?) and (??) on who is talking, will make it seem like the same one is talking. but I will not be changing it, each authors have there own writing style and mine is this way. hope you can look past it and still enjoy the read.