Delvogen

Delvogen

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Just someone who hopes to have his very own successful book one day. patreon.com/Lovetoread813

2019-01-28 Beigetreten United States
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Delvogen
3 months ago
Posted

Amazing start! I’m thrilled to see where this story goes. Your idea is one of the most original I’ve seen in a while, and Ron’s humor is a delightful addition. Overall, it’s incredibly enjoyable. Having read hundreds, if not over a thousand, of Harry Potter fanfics, I can confidently say this is one of the best beginnings I’ve come across. I’m eager to see what else you have in store.

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Delvogen
4 months ago
Posted

This fan fiction is impressive, offering a bit of everything for readers. I've read up to chapter 97, and the story continues to captivate as we approach the second year. Most characters remain true to the original canon while still showcasing unique and original elements. That being said, there are quite a few problems with the wording used, mostly in the later chapters that I have read. An example would be: uses her instead of him. Still giving it 5 stars because I enjoyed a new Harry Potter fan fic coming out.

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Delvogen
5 months ago
Replied to Shadow_Guest

Thanks. It has been corrected.

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Delvogen
6 months ago
Replied to zahra_kianpour

I owe you

"I understand, Harry, I do. I admit I need the money," Mike said with a gentle smile. "But I can't just take it without giving something in return. I'll write you an IOU. It might take me a while to repay, but I swear I will."

Ravenclaw of Hogwarts (HP)

Ravenclaw of Hogwarts (HP)

Book&Literature · Delvogen

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Delvogen
7 months ago
Posted

I'm genuinely enjoying it—please continue with the great work. Although it begins at a somewhat slow pace, I think things will be speeding along soon.

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Delvogen
7 months ago
Replied to FinnsRevenge

I have edited out a significant amount of the racism, sexism, and geopolitical themes present in many Chinese books.

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Delvogen
7 months ago
Replied to HadrianPeverell

woot

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Delvogen
7 months ago
Replied to HadrianPeverell

It's crazy, but I've been remembering it incorrectly for years.

Delvogen
Delvogen
7 months ago
Replied to HadrianPeverell

thanks

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Delvogen
7 months ago
Replied to Rochirush

I agree, Lector. In addition to that, there are numerous errors with pronouns, names, and several off-putting remarks. Furthermore, the author seems to struggle with maintaining consistency with what was written in the earlier chapters. I try to keep things running smoothly, but I'm aware that sometimes things sound off. Anyway, hope you all like it.

  • Don't read Auto translate for me to read at work on phone original

    Don't read Auto translate for me to read at work on phone

    Book&Literature

    This is just something I'll read while I'm at work. The translation isn't very good. I will delete it when I'm done in a few days.

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  • Ravenclaw of Hogwarts (HP) original

    Ravenclaw of Hogwarts (HP)

    Book&Literature ADVENTURE REINCARNATION MAGIC TRANSMIGRATION HARRYPOTTER WIZARDS

    Mike, formerly a career criminal, is reborn as a Muggle-born orphan in the Harry Potter world, focused on gaining power. With strategic cunning, he seeks allies and doesn't shy away from crossing moral lines for the "greater good." This tale explores a quest for power and societal change, presenting a gritty view of justice in a magical setting. Mike's journey, characterized by ruthless ambition and a merciless approach, also hints at the possibility of finding unexpected friendships along the way. "Don't call me Chen Ergou" is the author of this book. I'm just translating it and more importantly trying to make this story more "palatable" for an English audience. That means I will get rid of some of the darker and unnecessary undertones that many Chinese writers have - if you know what I mean. Also, I will be changing many of the more Chinese phrases (not all) around so that they are more understandable for us Westerners :) I plan to keep this translation going, especially if I receive help. I hope doing this will help me better my books in the future if I ever get the nerve to post them. My Patreon---- patreon.com/Lovetoread813 I will write a better synopsis soon. It should be noted that the MC is not a very good person.

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  • Wizard Among Heroes (HP X Marvel) original

    Wizard Among Heroes (HP X Marvel)

    Book&Literature REINCARNATION SYSTEM MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG TRANSMIGRATION MARVEL HARRYPOTTER

    A young man meets his demise, but after a brief stint in the afterlife, he manages to escape. To his surprise, he finds himself not only in the Harry Potter universe but also in the Marvel universe. His escape captures the attention of a few notable figures in the Marvel universe who give him a helping hand. While the story primarily unfolds in the Harry Potter universe initially, the Marvel universe becomes a significant part of the narrative much later. This work is a piece of fan fiction, and I lay no claim to the characters, settings, or any copyrighted elements from the original works. The only element that can be attributed to me is the main character (MC). Additionally, the cover art was personally created by me under a private account of Midjourney, making it my creation. This is my first book, so I welcome constructive criticism and suggestions. Please feel free to leave your feedback in the comments.

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