The eff xD
He needs to build up his familia at least recruit a few members to make up a team.
"They have already started to move…"
Danmachi: God of Heroes
Anime & Comics · The_Gamer2403
so maybe show the MC's Growth more or the familia as a whole? I'm not a writer so this is just a thought and maybe you are already going to do that in the next chapters since we're still only at chapter 10. so yeah..Good luck and may the god over the domain of writing and creativity bless you whoever they may be 😄
I need opinions on how this fanfic is handled. I've seen that the first chapters have not had a good reception, there are already 4 people who are commenting that they drop this due to how the MC behaves in the first 4 chapters. I would like to ask you if I should rewrite the first 4 chapters, obviously leaving the updates of the later chapters on hold. The estimated time it would take me to rewrite the chapters could be 2 weeks.
Danmachi: God of Heroes
Anime & Comics · The_Gamer2403
I think it's fine. You really can't satisfy everyone. Just continue on writing what you like. Just make those criticisms to improve and write better next time. Also, just a thought, i think the MC's being overshadowed by his child.
I need opinions on how this fanfic is handled. I've seen that the first chapters have not had a good reception, there are already 4 people who are commenting that they drop this due to how the MC behaves in the first 4 chapters. I would like to ask you if I should rewrite the first 4 chapters, obviously leaving the updates of the later chapters on hold. The estimated time it would take me to rewrite the chapters could be 2 weeks.
Danmachi: God of Heroes
Anime & Comics · The_Gamer2403
Dude can read now...
There were a few food options for lunch, but he chose the grilled fish with herb rice and a hearty venison stew—a thick, slow-cooked stew with chunks of meat, root vegetables (carrots, parsnips, onions), and a spiced broth. With his tray, he took a seat at a four-seater table that overlooked the Familia garden and started eating.
Danmachi: Scavenger
Anime & Comics · Emerging
He should max it out, I mean it has too many pros not to max it. While grinding to max the stat's he can brush up his other skills like halberd wielding and battle experience.
Should he level up without putting all stats at 1500 or reach 1500?]
Danmachi: Scavenger
Anime & Comics · Emerging
Electross has levitate though
The office shook violently as Garchomp delivered a ground-shattering attack. It wasn't just powerful—it was perfectly executed. The opposing Pokémon stood no chance, fainting instantly.
Pokémon: Starting With An Overpowered Gameboy Advance
Anime & Comics · Tempest_29
whishcash????
In just ten minutes, Chris encountered Zubat, Onix, Abra, Makuhita, Sableye, Whiscash, and Aron.
Pokémon: Starting With An Overpowered Gameboy Advance
Anime & Comics · Tempest_29
is it Aura?
"It's a mysterious power known as the Waveguide."
Trader In The World Of Pirates!!!
Anime & Comics · Novelette_Seeker
I remember it having aqua tail flamethrower thunder....
Moves: Hurricane, Dragon Rage, Roost, Fire Punch, Light Screen, Thunder Punch, Dragon Claw, Rain DanceÂ
Pokémon: My Farm Adventures
Anime & Comics · NovelExplorer