from the start of the quest, all his actions are idiotic, any sane person can tell this much. too much of the forced plot
Author there is no need to ask questions and answers in every 2 to 3 paragraphs, it is kind of annoying as this is simply common sense to leave some speculation to ponder to the readers and please stop detail his useless day to day activities like the breakfast and time spent in the school which is not necessary to the plot as it felt like you were adding those details for the word count.
Did he manage to get closer to it? Yes. He was a good driver...though the Range Rover car didn't slow down for a second, he still managed to get closer to it.
Prosperity System: I Became Rich By Stealing Heroines
Urban · Jeffson
it should be in pound.
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I am in debt of 20 billion and I work in the entertainment industry!
Eastern · Smutlove69
The author is giving way too much attention to the info dump in every chapter and their day to day life of every character instead of the story progression and even a single breakthrough of mc is taking such a long time so that the author can have everyday's word count get fulfilled... in the end even story now feels subpar as the author don't have any interest in the story except milking money out of it's readers
yes and sometimes neutral
hope so and i am talking about the first part and definitely not the second part. if possible, make him lose his v card along with it as this never losing v card plot has also gone too long.
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Author, i am truly tired waiting for something major to happen to mc. You have unnecessarily made losing his v card hard along with the other useless techniques of the mc requiring way too high resources and even all these techniques doesn't have much use now
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Author, this novel is too good, story, characters, etc are all good but just one complaint that I have is that too much info dump of far future is given in every chapter
truthfully after all those power ups and hypes and if he truly missed this opportunity to that girl due to this lousy illusion then this is one nasty way to have him nerfed down
Author there is really no need to explain the movie if you are not aiming for the word count instead of the actual plot
After the boy lost the ability to walk, the girl couldn't forgive herself and after a few years, she committed suicide leaving the body heart broken.
Harem King: Getting All The Ladies I Wanted!
Urban · AndyZero