missile18

male LV 14

huge fan of martial art :)

2019-01-02 Beigetreten France
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missile18
missile18
1 months ago
Commented

+1

missile18
missile18
1 months ago
Posted

good fan-fic. if you want to pass the time you lose nothing to give it a try

missile18
missile18
3 months ago
Commented

halo tech seems good enough no ?

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Marvel: Video Game Templates!

Marvel: Video Game Templates!

Movies · StrikerAuthor

missile18
missile18
4 months ago
Commented

what did you think about it does the system make sense or should just make a sort of progression along the use of biotech. Should I rewrite this chapter ? or the chatgtp version is good enough ?

missile18
missile18
6 months ago
Commented

+1

1. One piece - MC is a marine, born in lougetown and the story starts six years before Canon MC age - 16.

Naruto: Transmigrated as an Uchiha

Naruto: Transmigrated as an Uchiha

Anime & Comics · NoviceAuthor

missile18
missile18
6 months ago
Commented

hi, I think you made it clear enough that he was more powerful but didn't wanted to show it off. I like the fact that you don't get the MC overpowered from the get go but that you justify his progress :)

[AN: I got a bunch of comments that I want to mention here, as multiple people upset that Yuta are weaker than Hikari and Itachi. First of all - I don't know how you even came to this conclusion. It is stated that Yuta decided to not go all-out on the exam as it will rise many questions of how he managed to grow so much stronger 'overnight'. He decide to not use his strongest cards - fuinjutsu and genjutsu, and only use weakened version of elemental ninjutsu, as that will be enough to get the promotion. He already grown his chakra level to the level of an average Jonin, considering the time he spend for it, it can be said that it's a great achievement and most shinobi don't even get to that level in their entire life. If you still think that Yuta is too weak, then I have nothing to say to you, other than that there is a lot of novels of wish-fulfilment genre where MC is strong from the start, but I'm trying here to progress the story in the most 'realistic' way I envision for it. ]

Naruto: Time Traveler

Naruto: Time Traveler

Anime & Comics · Sycore_w

missile18
missile18
6 months ago
Posted

good enough as to enjoy somme good rrading

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missile18
11 months ago
Commented

it's fun and had a good introduction