Alexander_Scott_6422

nice story that doesn't jump straight into mayhem & screaming main storyline but gives us some of the backstory, which personally I prefer having some (.............alot) of knowledge of the storywriter's world which makes said world more solid. gotta point out a small mistake, it's written in the chapter as "computer CG" but the letter "C" is for "computer" so you've actually got it written as "computer computer graphics" & having it as just "CGI" is better

I'm guessing the movie is "The Thing" which Kurt Russell (& is infact a remake) & "Weird Thing" is what it's called in China. this happens alot in these stories with changed titles in Books, TV, Movies etc & at least this time it doesn't have me scratching my head trying to figure it out

somehow this chapter has been repeated

suggestion for MCs nickname..........Woody

MC is from another dimension heading northwards from South America to the US so why is he thinking/acting like a Chinese & also bumping into other Chinese compatriots. surely a better route (if your Chinese) would be straight across the Pacific directly to the US or to Canada & sneak down to the US which is definitely alot shorter journey & less dangerous than through the South American countries up to the US

females are deadlier than the males

there's a saying about the taller tree catches the wind and then gets cut down which basically means Keep a low f**k**g profile you stupid idiot of a MC. a 2m yuan BMW plus a villa is like starting a fire in the open in the dark when your being hunted. a van and a lonely farm in the countryside or somewhere desolate away from people would've been a smarter choice

advice to the MC, go to America & buy claymore mines etc & a roleplay metal armoured whole body suit with bullet proof glass filled helmet or DIY books on chemistry/electrical etc & use these types of knowledge to deal with enemies (a basic homemade power station that can easily electrocute someone as a home burglar alarm & protect your home n that's just the start)

so the MC is gonna make a profit by selling wood.............. finally a MC who's got his head screwed on properly. just a little thing, when sirname is mentioned does it mean surname?

MCs trying to understand a woman...........as i said before, give up