so is the person a she or a he?
When he reached the 18th floor, a female employee wearing a work badge called out to him by the water dispenser, "Hey, can you help lift a water barrel?"
The Only Player in 'Child of Stardust'
Urban · The sea is water
Oh,you decided to put the second half of chapter 5 here....if you can't come up with the word count to make a chapter please don't repeat the content of previous chapters to make up for it. It really makes you look amateurish
So all you did was basically repeat the first half of the last chapter, put a different title and think people wouldn't notice just to try to make more chapters
Why is it saying that he is still at the tenth level perfection when he is supposed to have already reached the 2nd level of the next realm
please get the grammar and the people's genders right
please get the guy's name right...it's been at least 3 different names already
We don't need constant updates on his skills, nor do you need to keep repeating the notifications as he gets his skills just to fill up the word count for each chapter.
Alright, so is Nemesis going to be a male or a female because the back and forth between genders is getting to be a headache
please keep the names straight and not keep changing them
Please for love of everything ,decide what sensuality the MC is going to be and quit bouncing back and forth
The Only Player in 'Child of Stardust'
Urban · The sea is water