I must have made a mistake, it happens.
So far no one, he is just a kid and I think it is preferable to strengthen the plot, which as many mention is quite weak.
why doesn't your review appear in the story... I don't quite understand your anger, but I'm glad you delivered your point of view. Thank you my friend. 👍👍
yes, it has some mistakes but it's not my style to make characters that can defeat everyone from the beginning, I like naive characters in the beginning, that mature and change over time. Of course your review is appreciated because I can see OTHER people's comments, thanks for the summary of comments.
Excellent idea
I totally agree, unfortunately William is not me.
thanks, I really try to do my best to keep the story moving at a good pace.
but that's harry potter xD
Christmas finally arrived at Hogwarts, it wasn't just around the corner, it was in the castle.
Harry Potter and the White Death Eater
Book&Literature · Anon20K
Yes, I have some mistakes, I will pay more attention in the future.
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original Harry Potter and the White Death Eater
4.43
Life does not usually lead people to the desired path even when the efforts are immense. After a death full of pain our character is reborn in a world of magic and fantasy but unfortunately he is in the worst place of all, he belongs to a family of Death Eaters.102 Chs 10.9k Sammlungen
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Harry Potter y el Mortífago blanco
4.69
La vida no suele llevar a las personas por el camino deseado aun cuando los esfuerzos sean inmenso. Luego de una muerte repleta de dolor nuestro personaje rencarna en un mundo de magia y fantasía pero lamentablemente esta en el peor lugar de todos, es perteneciente a una familia de mortifagos.103 Chs 930 Sammlungen
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Sistema Naruto en el mundo DxD
4.18
Dolor muscular . . . Fiebre alta . . . Cierra los ojos lentamente esperando el final y segundos después estas dentro de otro cuerpo. [El sistema se instalo satisfactoriamente] [Bienvenido al sistema] [Gira la ruleta y deja que el sistema obtenga un tema] [Sistema Naruto] Solo el personaje de Haru es de mi propiedad, el resto de los personajes pertenecen a sus respectivos dueños vale decir High School DxD o Naruto174 Chs 3.4k Sammlungen
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el gran sistema de fantasía de anime
4.61
[El sistema Fantasia se activó con éxito] Con ese mensaje frente a los ojos de Haruta, su vida cambió una vez más, unas horas antes había sido víctima de una reencarnación forzada y ahora tenía una especie de sistema en su cabeza. La historia del afroamericano comienza dentro del cuerpo de un japonés que vive en el mundo del anime. La portada no es mi autoridad, solo le puse el título. Créditos a sus respectivos autores. La portada cambiará de acuerdo con el arco / volumen de la historia, si tiene un apoyo constante, haré todo lo posible para tener portadas originales. Los personajes dentro de la novela no me pertenecen a excepcion de Haruta y Yamamoto159 Chs 2.2k Sammlungen
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the Great Anime Fantasy System
3.95
[The Fantasia System was successfully activated] With that message in front of Haruta's eyes, his life turned over once more, a few hours ago he had been the victim of a forced reincarnation and now he had a kind of system in his head. The story of the African American begins within the body of a Japanese who lives in the world of anime. The cover is not my authority, I just put the title on it. Credits to their respective author. The cover will change according to the arc / volume that the story is, if you have constant support I will do my best to have original covers.122 Chs 7k Sammlungen
para subir en el ranking y bueno para eso xD
Harry Potter y el Mortífago blanco
Book&Literature · Anon20K