Hey man, thanks for your honest review. Power Progression in this novel was indeed handled badly in this story. No excuses. I acknowledge the mistake and say I'll try not to make it in the future stories. The Character Consistency is a good point of criticism, I don't think others brought that up before. Personally, I dont see it as comoletely disjointed, but the way problems are solved in arcs varied so much that it felt more inconsistent than it really was. Its hard to maintain that character consistency for a long novel, but since I've seen how it went wrong, I'll try to do it right. Other than these two, if you have other criticisms, feel free to share. I might not agree with every criticism, but I make sure to give them some thought. Oh and if you don't mind, also expand on what you liked. Have a good day.
Thank you for your support! The story is ending in September. I'm excited and I hope you are too.
No worries. And for Webnovels in general, there are different tiers for privilege chapters. DPS' 35 chaps is tier 5, 30 chaps is tier 4, 20 is tier 3, 10 is tier 2 and 2 chaps is tier 1, each tier with different pricing. Tier 1 is 1 coin to access (chaps have to be unlocked as usual), so tier 1 more or less non-existent.
The story will end in September. Once it does, the priv chapters will be released 2 a day and you don't have to pick any privilege tier. Just give it a month.
Thanks for your wishes and support. I've been better than ever. I wish the same for you. If youre planning to buy priv next month, please skip a month and do so in September. The story is ending in that month (unless any major changes).
The reverse. Vuja de is when you see something you've always seen and feel it is unfamiliar.
A Vuja De experience.
Divine Path System
Fantasy · _Transcendent
They are included, just not explicitly mentioned. Due to intermarrying and racial integration in those 20,000 yearss, Hortians and even humans is a term that has come to mean everyone who once resided in Hortus.
Yes, there is. Open my profile.
A few days to sort out the next few arcs. I have resumed writing today and would probably not take another break :D Sorry & Thanks for the wait.
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original Divine Path System
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A recurring dream from a fateful night haunts Varian. With a past he couldn't forgive himself for and a future he abandoned, his life in the present is in tatters. But when you're alive, there's hope. The hope comes one day in an unexpected form. The painful past, the meaningless dream and the unexpected way forward force him to make a choice. Stay broken and remain in the sorrow of the past he couldn't change. Or. Pick himself back together and try for one last time, to find the truth about his own dream and its connection to his unforgivable past, all in the hopes of forgiveness of himself, by himself. https://discord.gg/kBKaTtsrpb1722 Chs 41.4k Sammlungen
Sorry for the abrupt break. Itll take a while for DPS to resume. It wont take long to end since were approaching the end—wont be rushed either, itll have enough space. The title of the next novel is not decided (I'm all ears). Its not started. The plot has three components: VR, Heroes vs Villains (awakened on earth), Cosmic Gods. I have the power system and broader world of the story set. I'm maybe 2/3 done in the whole process. DPS run highlighted some issues I really want to solve—the cohesiveness of overall plot, from ch 1 to end. I have my complaints on how the story shifted from Abyss Saga to Eden Saga as well as some Arcs (looking at you Ruins Arc, Valos Arc). So, I want to make an outline and get the skeleton down. Might be chewing more than I can swallow as it looks like I'm overdoing it or maybe just doing it wrong, but gotta make an attempt. I'll either write a good story or I'll learn how.
Divine Path System
Fantasy · _Transcendent