Imago_Dei

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Deus Animo

2018-10-16 Beigetreten Global
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Moments 35
Imago_Dei
Imago_Dei
8 months ago
Commented

And Heidi definitely understood the assigned. Lol

"I hope you fall in love one day, Nick. A love that will need you to work hard for."

Bambi and the Duke

Bambi and the Duke

Fantasy · ash_knight17

Imago_Dei
Imago_Dei
10 months ago
Commented

*to protect

''That's good. Ana, this is good news. I am going to be a grandmother soon. Shiao, call your uncle. Tell him I want a few of his boys to pretend Ana and Lin Shen from this animal here. Let me warn you, Yu Huo. Don't think that you are powerful. Once the divorce is finalized, I will have half of everything that has your name to it. You had better stay away from my daughter in law.'' Jiajia warned.

Music Is Love!?

Music Is Love!?

Urban · Purplebride

Imago_Dei
Imago_Dei
11 months ago
Commented

*sit over there

''Mm! I am fine.'' Lin Shen found a seat at the garden and pointed at it. ''Let's seat over there…''

Music Is Love!?

Music Is Love!?

Urban · Purplebride

Imago_Dei
Imago_Dei
11 months ago
Commented

*Lin Shen

''I know but I just feel that, that Ana has too many troubles with her family life. Lin She got hurt because of her. We are lucky this was found earlier. What if it had affected Lin Shen more?''

Music Is Love!?

Music Is Love!?

Urban · Purplebride

Imago_Dei
Imago_Dei
11 months ago
Commented

*is Lin Shen inside?

''Thank you. It's Lin Shen inside?''

Music Is Love!?

Music Is Love!?

Urban · Purplebride

Imago_Dei
Imago_Dei
1 years ago
Commented

*HER greediness

During the intense pain, Yang Ran finally admitted that the contraction had appeared a while ago. Now that the pain was unbearable, Yang Ran was starting to regret his greediness.

The Wedding Planner's Romance

The Wedding Planner's Romance

Urban · zetsubouaichan

Imago_Dei
Imago_Dei
1 years ago
Commented

*before the next song STARTS.

He observed her complexion for a while. Then, seeing that she was alright, Qi Zheng then looked away. "Then, let's leave here before the next song was going to start."

The Wedding Planner's Romance

The Wedding Planner's Romance

Urban · zetsubouaichan

Imago_Dei
Imago_Dei
1 years ago
Posted

I really liked the first 60 chapters but I felt that the succeeding chapters were rushed. There were a lot of typography errors too such as Perry being Parry, Samuel being Samael and the names are interchanged. This story has a good potential but needs a lot of revision in terms of writing and some plots need to be given proper closure.

Imago_Dei
Imago_Dei
1 years ago
Commented

*Perry

Adam Parry aka "K" thought back to the time five years ahead.. when they had met for the first time..

Seducing The Ice Queen

Seducing The Ice Queen

Urban · har_k

Imago_Dei
Imago_Dei
1 years ago
Posted

I added this because I liked the preview and the first 20 chapters were really good. However, the plot seems to be off-track and rushed. Characters were coming in, FL suddenly has a twin, she suddenly knows martial arts, there were suddenly mafia-terrorist fights and the ML's backstory is so inconsistent. I feel like the author has potential but he/she seems to not have a solid plan as to how she wants the story to be.