This is a great book to read! I love the synopsis and the first chapter got me hooked and curious about what will happen to Azkiel. The Author has a great writing skill too. I love the pacing of the story and the narration of it. The Author was able to bring the readers to Azkiel's world with just the words alone. Great job Author! Looking forward for the next chapters.
The title was intriguing and it made me curious about what this story will be. The synopsis catches my attention the same way the title captivates me. The plot was unique. But, editing is needed here and there, for example the proper punctuation and capitalization and the grammar looks fine for me the same as the pacing of the story. Also, the description at the beginning was good but, too much information was given at the very beginning which might be a problem. It's fine to give informations but, it should be lessen, since other information regarding the story can be shown in a different way other than the description/narration. Just like what the other authors/editors/coaches always say "Show don't Tell". But other than that the Author did a good job! Good luck and I'm looking forward for the rest of the chapters and on how will Mia's story unfolds as the story goes.
Wow! I'm done with the first two chapters and this story is unique and intriguing that I am getting immersed as I read further. I love how good this book is written. this is well-written, from the character designs up to the world background. everything is well-thought and well-written. the author did a great job writing this story and this is a must read/recommend!
Amazing story Author! The synopsis was intriguing, the first five chapters are well-written and established the story very well. I love how great the author write the story. The storytelling, the narration, and description are well done and well-written plus the choices of words that it made it easy to read specially for non-English speakers like me. I also love how smooth the pacing of this book. You did a great job in writing this book Author!
Thank you
Amazing! I just finished the first few chapters and I can't wait to read the next chapters! I love how short but mysterious and intriguing the synopsis are. I love how unique the plot is and the author also has a great writing style/skill that I am getting immersed in this book plus the lingering mystery feeling left in my mind after reading the first few chapters. You did a great job Author! This is a must read everyone!
This is a masterpiece! Good job Author! The synopsis got me curious since I'm not that familiar in this genre, and reading this was a great choice. The plot was unique and I love your awesome writing skill. Author did a great job in writing this book, the narration and the choices of words are on point and fits perfectly. The author got an imaginative and creative mind and an excellent skill in putting into words the world of this book and making the readers see it with their imagination. Great job Author! Looking forward for the rest of the chapters.
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Justine Aisha Green experienced a lot of pain and heartache from her previous relationship, even though, she still manages to live her life. After waking up from almost five years of being in a coma, her life returned to normal until she met an unexpected person, named Aaron Collins. He was able to make her fall in love again, but, will he also break her heart once again? Will Justine find her happiness? Or she’s meant to be alone? Can she handle hardships and downfalls once again? Or, will she gave up on everything she had? There is no perfect relationship after all. Time will test both of them as every challenge and struggle came forward to them. Hindi naman lahat ng relationship goals na pagmamahalan ay smooth sailing. Dahil hindi nawawala sa isang relasyon ang mga pagsubok. Kalakip na ng salitang pagmamahal at pag-ibig ang salitang sakit at pagsubok. “Justine, can’t you give me another chance?” “I’m sorry” “I know I’ve hurt you many times, I made you cry, but Justine-” “Stop! ayoko ko nang marinig pa ang mga sasabihin mo” Si Aaron na nga ba ang lalaki na nakalaan para kay Justine?. O, isa na naman itong panibagong kabiguan para kay Justine?3 Chs 11 Sammlungen
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RAINBOW ROAD (ENGLISH VERSION)
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Kasey Okamoto, a responsible student, and daughter of a well-known restaurant owner in Japan. Even though she came from a well-off family she still chooses to work as a model to earn her own money together with her older brother. She was just a normal and typical teenage girl living her senior high school life until her world suddenly turned upside down as the cheerful, lively, and optimistic Kasey disappeared. Now, that she's in the Philippines with her grandfather, she decided to change herself, as well as to forget and recover from all of the pain and traumatic experiences that came into her life. And, when she met and got to know more about Nice Tolentino together with his close friends at their campus she thought that it might be a stepping stone to heal and forget her painful and traumatic past. At first, she hated Nice for being rude, but, eventually will she fall for him? But, what if, Nice unexpectedly learns about her past, what if he found out the reason why does she act that way towards them. Will it make him get closer and slowly fall in love with her? Or, he already likes her since the first time they met. Will it make him understand her and fall for her more? What if Kasey falls in love with Nice? Will this bring their current relationship closer? What if those people she wishes so badly to forget come back and appear once again in her life? Is she ready to face her past again and start a new one with Nice? [ Hello everyone! This is the link for Rainbow Road if you want to read the rest of the story: https://www.webnovel.com/book/rainbow-road_20223099105206505 ] [Disclaimer: I didn't own the picture/image I used as the cover photo. Credits to its original owner. It's from Pinterest Thank you!]11 Chs 6 Sammlungen
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Rainbow Road (Tagalog)
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Kasey Okamoto, simple and responsible student and daughter, former model and she was the daughter of a well-known restaurant owner in their country. Noon isa lamang syang normal na (grade 10) senior high school student, not until her world turns upside down. Now that she was here in the Philippines with her grandfather, she decided to change herself, she's trying to forget and recover from all the pain she had. When she met Nice and his friends at their campus she thought that it might be a stepping stone in changing herself and forgetting her past. At first, she hated Nice but then will she fall for him? even though she hates him. But, what if, Nice unexpectedly learn about her past, he found out the reason why does she act that way towards them. Magiging daan ba ito para mapalapit at mahalin nya Kasey? O, may gusto na ba sya dito noon pa lang? Magiging daan pa ito para lumalim pa ang nararamdaman nya? Paano kung magka-gusto si Kasey kay Nice? Magiging sila ba, kahit na alam na ni Nice ang nakaraan ni Kasey? Paano kung ang mga tao at mga bagay na nais nyang kalimutan ay bumalik? Ano ang gagawin nya? Iiwas ba sya o hindi? Is she ready to face her past again and start a new one with Nice? [Disclaimer: I didn't own the picture/image I used as the cover photo. Credits to its original owner. By the way, the title of the manhua of the image I used was To Be Winner and the authors are Ke Xiao Sha - Zuo Xiao Ling... Thank you!]25 Chs 68 Sammlungen
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Just A Dream: FALL FOR YOU [TAGALOG/FILIPINO]
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Can LOVE overcome all the obstacles in a relationship? How about friendship? Betrayal? Maaari pa bang ibalik ang lahat sa dati, kung papaano at ano ito noon? Makakaya ba nilang lagpasan ang lahat ng problema na darating sa kanilang buhay? Justine Aisha Green, senior high school student and she were in love with her schoolmate. And on one afternoon she finally confessed her feelings for him but, he didn’t feel the same way towards her. But then, when she was about to give up and move on from her feelings for him, Jayson came to tell her that he loves her. Everything seems so perfect, all of them were happy and enjoying their youth, nang isang di inaasahang aksidente na mala-bangungot ang dumating sa kanila at bumago sa buhay ng bawat isa. Will this accident lead their friendships and relationship to destruction or it will strengthen their relationships? Will she overcome all the pain she would go through?. Will she find her happiness?.3 Chs 93 Sammlungen
The title was a bit long but catchy! I love the philosophy at 1st chapter. The way the author write and the word choices are great too! This is a great book to read. I highly recommend it to everyone. Good job Author! 👍👏👏👏
I Wrote a Poem and Now I'm Stuck in Another World with an Idiot.
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