Dummygg6

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2018-10-06 Beigetreten Global
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Dummygg6
Dummygg6
8 months ago
Posted

Translation is a total mess that even a MTL has a higher quality.

Dummygg6
Dummygg6
2 years ago
Posted

The plot is forced. the story development is incoherent. The scenes change back and forth, while something always strangely happens when MC is there. MC auctioned off her potion for a long time. A random guy in the city decided that he wants to make trouble the moment MC is went to the auction, which again long time has been passed, to force the mysterious alchemist (MC) that suspected to be kept by the auctioneer out. The potion is also another thing. MC excused for selling it is her mother heirloom. However, some big shot already know that it's freshly concocted, MC used random master as a disguise. Later on this master no longer mentioned and she went back to used her missing mother again, what the f. The characters are also conflicting. The father want to quit the family, the MC doesn't want her father to quit or what for some reason and decided to show off. In the end showing off doesn't do anything. They quit family, reveal her real power to everyone.

Dummygg6
Dummygg6
3 years ago
Commented

The flag is raised.

Seeing the worried look on School Head Mo's face, Zhang Xuan shook his head helplessly. "Rest assured, I am only heading out to find a way to treat the Golden Origin Cauldron. I won't cause any unnecessary trouble!"

Library of Heaven's Path

Library of Heaven's Path

Ost · Heng Sao Tian Ya

Dummygg6
Dummygg6
4 years ago
Commented

No penguin or ostrich beast, huh?

" That's a stupid question. Have you ever heard of a beast that has wings but can't fly? He should be able to fly," Xun replied.

Rise of the Demon God

Rise of the Demon God

Ost · Demonic_angel

Dummygg6
Dummygg6
4 years ago
Commented

Hakuna Matata

"Heaven is divine, and the Divine is human. The Ancient is past, and the past is dead. O Merciful Lord, let this person enter to see the full glory of the Divine. Akhumba Mikaaku Xalami Sensen Kekeni," Long Chen read from the letter.

Rise of the Demon God

Rise of the Demon God

Ost · Demonic_angel

Dummygg6
Dummygg6
4 years ago
Commented

To prevent a panda.

"Divine Heaven Sect was crazy. Why the heck did they make so many stairs? I swear I'm going to be so pissed if I don't get anything useful when I get to the top," Long Chen muttered.

Rise of the Demon God

Rise of the Demon God

Ost · Demonic_angel

Dummygg6
Dummygg6
4 years ago
Commented

If they're satisfied, why are they creating.

"Why would the gods not be satisfied. They can have everything they want. They created everything. There can be nothing that they're dissatisfied about," she said.

Rise of the Demon God

Rise of the Demon God

Ost · Demonic_angel

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