This story has an amazing plotline. The author has also outdone himself in creating his world background. The sentence descriptions are also well-written with minimal grammatical errors. Good job, Author!
All I can say is that I love the story. I was giggling and swooning like a teenager while reading it that I almost forgot I need to leave a review. There are minimal grammatical errors that I think can be easily corrected. And I just want to say that I really love the action scene in the opening chapter. It was really well-written. Good job Author!
The story is interesting because its different from the usual plots that I read before. Though I think that I would still like Xiao Ying to have a physical body inside the story later on (just wishful thinking😁). There are minimal grammatical errors and spelling mistakes but that can be easily corrected. Overall the sentences are well-writte and rich in details. Good job!
Although I'm not really familiar with mecha-themed plotlines, I can still say that the Author had put a lot of effort in building his world background as well as in incorporating jargons pertaining to mechanized equipments and weapons. Kudos to that! I also think that the Author has a stable grasp of good writing. The descriptions and sentence structures are well-written with minimal grammatical errors. Good job! Keep up the good work.
I think that this is an interesting story. I like the whole pre-historic concept and the world background that I want to keep reading it.I also like that the male lead is dependable and has a good head on his shoulders. Good job Author!
It's a good story. And I can tell that the Author put a lot of thought to her characters. I also like that the characters are described in details that I can actually visualize what they would look like. Aside from that, I like the female lead's bubbly personality and the male lead's tsundere personality 😀😃. They are really adorable. Good job!
For starters, I think that the author has a good grasps of writing because the sentences are well written. And just in a few chapters, the author already managed to leave an impression of what kind of personality the main character has, which I think is good. Just regularly update, and add more descriptive details to your story. Good job! and Good luck! 😀😊
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original The Emperor's Flower
Elianna does not believe in love and marriage. She had decided a long time ago that she would grow old alone. Besides, being a spinster doesn’t bother her at all. She can use her money to get admitted to a nursing care facility if she is too old and rickety to take care of herself. And she truly believed that till, A strange turn of events for her soul to take up residence in the body of a young lady from a faraway land full of mystery and enigma. Elianna is certain that she will willingly die a second time to escape her unexpected destiny. She doesn’t want to live in a world with a dwindling female population, and to keep the line of succession going, every suitable young lady is compelled to marry and bear children. She would rather live in hiding than get married, even if the Emperor himself is asking for her hand! When an iron-hearted modern-day woman who does not believe in love is involved in a twisted fate with an Emperor bound by his duty to the Empire, the story takes an unexpected turn. Getting married is the only way out of this national crisis!11 Chs 6 Sammlungen
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The Legend of the Crimson Oracle
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Selene had decided to live her life for somebody else, a punishment she imposed on herself since her mother’s death. Because of that she has been actively engaged in various charitable events and organizations, sparing no time for rest. She believes it is also a good distraction from the growing emptiness gnawing in her heart. That is until a dream about a boy and a forgotten promise keeps haunting her sleep, pulling her out of her monotonous life. Before she knows it, Selene got dragged in a series of events that she’d only seen in television and read in novels. To make things worse, to get back home she is given an impossible task that she had no idea how to accomplish. Although she had dedicated her remaining years to help people, saving an entire world completely different from hers is another story. While traversing into a mystical world where magic is essential, with monsters as powerful foes and countries ruled by kings and queen are waging war with each other, Selene finds herself at the center of the chaos, with each vying for her power and loyalty. And although she had decided to do everything in her power to go back home, meeting the boy in her dreams and learning the truth about their past, Selene is at a sudden crossroads. She never thought that in the midst of chaos, she will find the person who is both the cause and the cure for the eternal emptiness in her heart.81 Chs 425 Sammlungen
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Doom of Elianna: The Emperor's Flower
Elianna does not believe in love and marriage. She had decided a long time ago that she will grow old alone—besides, being a spinster doesn't bother her at all. She can just use her money to get admitted to a nursing care facility if she is too old and rickety to even take care of herself. And that's what she honestly thought until…. A sudden twist of fate forced her soul to inhabit the body of a young lady in a distant and mysterious world far different from her own. Elianna is confident she would willingly die once more just to escape her newfound fate. There is no way she would want to live in a world with a dwindling female population and that every eligible young lady is forced to marry and produced heirs to continue the procreation. Even if it is the Emperor himself asking for her hand in marriage! This is a story of an iron-hearted modern-age woman who does not believe in love finds herself entangled in a twisted destiny with a passionate and warm-hearted Emperor bounded by his duty to the Empire. It seems like the only solution to this national crisis is to get hitched!7 Chs 5 Sammlungen
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Love Bites
Caitlin grew up in a normal family. For her, her life is nothing but normal. Atleast, that's what she is trying to achieve. Hindi niya aakalain na sa isang simpleng maling desisyon ay magbabago ng tuluyan ang buong buhay niya. Ang normal na buhay na pinakaka-ingatan niya ay nawalang parang bula. Her world was turned upside and down and she finds herself spiralling down the abyss, completely out of control. If only she could turn back the time. She shouldn't have succumbed to her desires.22 Chs 52 Sammlungen
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Trembling Hearts
Hindi nais ni Charlie na magkaroon ng kumplikadong buhay na mas titindi pa sa meron siya ngayon. Kaya nga ginagawa niya ang lahat ng kanyang makakaya para umiwas sa gulo ngunit mukhang may ibang plano ang tadhana para sa kanya. Ever since witnessing a certain incident that involves Alessandro Roman Gatchalian a notorious womanizer known for his complicated taste in women, Charlie’s life also takes an even more complicated turn. Despite knowing how complicated he is—it seems that she can’t stop worrying about him. Before she knows it she found herself tangled in weaves of secrets, lies and intrigues that revolve around him. To make matters worse—habang tumatagal mas lalong nagiging malinaw para sa kanya ang tunay niyang nararamdaman para sa binata. Charlie found herself falling in love. It was a ridiculous notion even for her. And she only have two options left. One is to run away while she still can or two—make him fall in love with her despite knowing that hell would freeze over before that even happens. Either way, she’ll get herself hurt. Ano bang dapat niyang piliin?15 Chs 4 Sammlungen
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The Legend of the Crimson Oracle
Fantasy · Sharelvandor