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Overall I liked the fic, it wasn't perfect by any means but it was enjoyable. Some nitpicks for future reference; The money thing with Elon Musk was meh, I think the aging up of people wasn't necessary unless you really want Bruno Mars lol. That being said I look forward to the rewrite.

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

His family members and close friends.

Thanks for the chapter. If it's not to much trouble can you make an Appendix page of characters.

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Thanks for the chapter

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Thanks for the chapter. I wonder if with Billy, JK will give "Harry Potter" an actual magic system lol.

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Thanks for the chapter