I would say that this book is well written however the pace is to fast. You could slow down the pace of training and explain the cost of thing like training equipment and daily expenses how much you looted
This is one of the best novels I’ve read I know you are good at fan fics as I’ve read ring maker but I suggest you write your own story and world rather than fan fics becuase your works are really great
I’m looking thinking did I make a mistake just one chapter have I been spoiled or something
The quality is poo really bad really bad really really bad
It’s a great novel up to date with the latest chapters got to say the power gains is really slow it’s written different from other books and has a good style
Are you back now for good?
Wow 15 chapters wasn’t expecting that
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Your tanked 1st in popularity in sports section
The updates are slow
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