comonerStafford

comonerStafford

male LV 15

Just a commoner

2018-09-20 Beigetreten United Kingdom
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comonerStafford
comonerStafford
15 days ago
Posted

The start is great chapter 38 so far however there is to few chapters to judge the content. Keep up the good work

comonerStafford
comonerStafford
19 days ago
Posted

To bad it was dropped even so I enjoyed reading it very much

comonerStafford
comonerStafford
1 months ago
Commented

Cedric is a 4th or third year based on the goblet of fire making him the same year as the twins

comonerStafford
comonerStafford
2 months ago
Commented

It would be good to do a Harry Potter version of this but to start the story very early in the world and show the progression bit by bit then when the charater reaches modern times do a golden list

comonerStafford
comonerStafford
2 months ago
Commented

There are no wolves in the U.K

comonerStafford
comonerStafford
3 months ago
Commented

The updates are slow

comonerStafford
comonerStafford
3 months ago
Posted

I would say that this book is well written however the pace is to fast. You could slow down the pace of training and explain the cost of thing like training equipment and daily expenses how much you looted

comonerStafford
comonerStafford
3 months ago
Posted

This is one of the best novels I’ve read I know you are good at fan fics as I’ve read ring maker but I suggest you write your own story and world rather than fan fics becuase your works are really great

comonerStafford
comonerStafford
3 months ago
Commented

I’m looking thinking did I make a mistake just one chapter have I been spoiled or something

comonerStafford
comonerStafford
4 months ago
Posted

The quality is poo really bad really bad really really bad

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