RedCeiling

RedCeiling

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I am more of a reader than a writer. But writing gives greater satisfaction.

2018-09-13 Beigetreten India
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RedCeiling
RedCeiling
4 months ago
Commented

I login just for this story, author. Waiting for the next update

RedCeiling
RedCeiling
1 years ago
Commented

Update please ❤️

RedCeiling
RedCeiling
1 years ago
Commented

"Don't see women as fine ladies, see them as rational creatures." ~Jane Austen. Please.

Sheng Chu wasn't truly mad. As a woman, it was her instinct to blame men.

Rebirth To Chase My Ex-Wife [BL]

Rebirth To Chase My Ex-Wife [BL]

LGBT+ · Mao_Yuxuan

RedCeiling
RedCeiling
1 years ago
Commented

xinxin* it's written xunxin

While Jiang Yanxu patted Ye Xunxin's back reluctantly until Ye Xinxin loosened his grip.

Rebirth To Chase My Ex-Wife [BL]

Rebirth To Chase My Ex-Wife [BL]

LGBT+ · Mao_Yuxuan

RedCeiling
RedCeiling
2 years ago
Commented

'give a reaction*' or just 'react'

RedCeiling
RedCeiling
2 years ago
Commented

I thought she was still spitting blood because someone kicked her? She's here sleeping at home. If you ever review this novel, please make sure there's the required consistency.

"No!" Sara shrieked out, sitting up straight. She was palpitating, as cold beads sweats formed on her forehead. She looked around, it was not her old house. It was just a nightmare.

Chasing My Ex Husband要

Chasing My Ex Husband要

Urban · dreamygurl7968

RedCeiling
RedCeiling
2 years ago
Replied to dnvfrye

I'm Asian, just not Chinese and I'm also confused.

An inexplicable marriage and an inexplicable divorce.

Being A Shrew to My Ex-Husband After Our Divorce

Being A Shrew to My Ex-Husband After Our Divorce

General · Wuxia

RedCeiling
RedCeiling
2 years ago
Commented

Alright, this is the second time she's walking away before she finished speaking completely. I am not a great writer myself but as a reader I have trouble imagining that. If she's going to walk out before completing her sentence, how much exactly is heard by WZ? I think it's important that I know what he hears. Take this as an advice, if you will.

Su Yan stood up and walked out before she could finish her sentence. The moment she turned around, her eyes were uncontrollably red.

Being A Shrew to My Ex-Husband After Our Divorce

Being A Shrew to My Ex-Husband After Our Divorce

General · Wuxia

RedCeiling
RedCeiling
RedCeiling
2 years ago
Posted

great story. while there is quite an amount of sci-fi, it's preserved its romance well. FL is pretty cool with computer programming. ML's character development was slow and steady. It's quite a natural progression

  • To Reach You original

    To Reach You

    Urban LOVEAFTERMARRIAGE

    Vance Vonn Cale is a heartthrob at 26. Having studied finance, he works as the CFO for U.Y. Corp where he had been working since completing studies. Nicolette Perrin is a computer programmer working for Abel Games and has dreamed of being a violinist since college. She is 22 years old. Both had no faith in marriage for their own reasons. When the two families met for a proposal, though Nicole objected and Vance thought the same, he gave his consent before their parents. Nicole's eyes had narrowed then but would their now entangled lives have a wedge or the fortune of love?

    21 Chs 16 Sammlungen

  • Struggle Of Love original

    Struggle Of Love

    Urban FIRSTLOVE DOCTOR

    Abgeschlossen

    [Completed]: Volume 1: Loss of a firm hold. [Upcoming]: Volume 2: Intertwined fingers. [Excerpt]: "I think I love you," I told him. The feeling of wanting to be with him for the rest of the time started the day he first visited me at the orphanage. "You do, and I love you too." Then he walked nearer, "Promise me it'll be the two of us," he asked. "Promise." But was that really possible? "I'm technically your sister," I said. We were old enough to understand certain things. "Adopted." He stressed. "What I asked them was I wanted to you be with me forever. There will be no one to point on that," he said. Were things really that simple? But listening him say them was all I needed. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I found out that I was pregnant almost a fortnight ago and which woman does not be happy? I wanted to tell him first and I did. But the reaction he gave made me doubt my entire life. First it was a surprise and then, as I waited for his response, I watched his eyes become happy. But before he smiled, a very small and indecipherable frown appeared and he hugged me tight not giving me a chance to read his face anymore. His breathing was quick and heavy. After he released me, I took in the smile on his face; only, I didn't know if I should call it a smile. All there was in his eyes was a hue of sadness. "What's wrong?" I questioned him directly. His face changed once again. He seemed troubled. "Nothing," he smiled and added that he was happy. "You're not," I stated. He is not a fool to think that I would not know when something is wrong. And he would be more wrong to think that I would let this slip. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ “Look at me.” I said calmly. He shifted his head but still avoided my eyes. I walked up to him and put my eyes in his line of sight. “Don’t you know what I mean ‘every day’?” He took a quick step back. “Jessie, what’s wrong? Why are you like this?” What’s wrong? An ear piercing sound rang through the room. I slapped hard across the face. Then I noticed that I started crying. Through my blurry eyes, I saw his eyes tearing up too. This was yet another unpleasant first. The first time I was forced to slap him. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ “Are you okay?” I asked him lifting my head to see his face. His chin rested on my head and I still did not have a proper look. I tried to move my head slowly in another attempt, but he held me tight, not letting me move. Was he still crying? Perhaps that was why he did not like me seeing him. When we were kids and something troubled him, he used to find me to let it out. Crying was included sometimes. He did not hide his tears back then. Because, boys did not particularly cry in front of their girls, I questioned him how he saw this once. It was a playful teasing that I aimed at. But, he gave me a serious and truthful confession in return. Mentally I am the stronger one and he told me that crying in front of me never felt like he was lowering himself. That was his level of acceptance. But everything he is doing now is in a stark controversy to my beliefs. He spoke after calming himself more, “I’m not.” [Target Audience]: This story has 3 volumes. From the name, it is not odd that this is totally based on love. The first volume is a little tragic, the reason why it is under realistic fiction. If tragic romance upsets you, then this might as well. **[UNEDITED]** I didn't proof read all the parts. But I usually keep an eye to check for mistakes as I write. So hopefully there are not too many of them. Will be editing soon.

    61 Chs 376 Sammlungen