Alway high score for a Kiba fic. The idea sounds good cannot wait for the new chapters.
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This book is very good. The grammar is above most fanfics. The only problem is update speed and amount it will make you feel like reading more.
Just finished reading this fic. Was hoping to know if you were going to continue writing. It’s one of the rare Naruto fanfics that the mc isn’t Kage level the moment he is born. Really interested in how you were going to deal with Danzo after the Chunin exams. Really great work thanks for writing it.
Ok this prologue goes hard… Can’t wait for more. Thanks for the chapter.
Great fanfic really captured the characters and world. As for the translation I don’t know the accuracy for I don’t know the language but the grammar and syntax is fin amiable. I highly recommend reading this fanfic as either a Naruto or a Demon Slayer Fan.
A nice story with a good ending what else is there to say.
Hope this one gets picked up. Good story!!
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Hope this gets picked this has a nice leveling system for the world and a decent hook.
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Just a few common mix ups with he and she are the only grammatical mistakes I noticed. But this is a nice story so far a bit of a fast power up for the mc but still well pace with story . Pretty good story nonetheless. Hope it gets picked up!!
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Can’t wait please release when you’re ready. Really liked your previous work. Thanks for the update and good luck with your new project.
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