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7mth

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???How does this make sense to anyone. Did he just almost cripple himself for a spar? What if the guy doesn't have the potion? You just are cripple now?

ch 15 Mana Step

Return Of The Strongest Player

Fantasy · AceAmbrosia

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7mth

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As of chapter 15, the whole book seems very forced and unnatural. It feels like the author did not consider how people actually react and converse, so they just put whatever script and responses they planned to have and went on with the plot.The MC's reaction to his Mum, then the way he spoke to Melzer, etc. Difficult to read.Also, readers need to assume a lot of stuff. For example, he only awakens his mana after a week of hunting, but there is no explanation why he did not do it the first day, or what the requirements were, etc...Anyways, I may leave a different review if I make it further.

Return Of The Strongest Player

Fantasy · AceAmbrosia

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3yr

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I feel this is terrible portrayal of this sect. A sect would never be so petty as to rob their new disciples and make them have a grudge. (Litterally the next generation of the sect.) This is counterintuitive and these old men would know. There is no way this theft would occur so openly; even if similar things happened in secret, the elders would never do it for other sects and tens of thousands of sect members to see.

ch 82 Chapter 82 Not first place?

Monarch of Time

Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian

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3yr

Replied to ArchbishopOfSloth

The mc is a sham.

The Magician of Sound

Sci-fi · Fixten

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3yr

Replied to Sangabriel

The mc is so weak compared to how the author portrays him. After his abilities are revealed, he is still the useless guy without any offensive magic. Which is weird, cause who seriously creates a suicide attack before creating a normal attack? There is no way that happens. He even has time to continue creating more skills before creating a normal attack. I feel the mc is an unrealistic sham. He is even in a 2 relationships but refuses to show either of these girls any sort of affection. To the point of treating one like a nuisance. It's so weird.