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that's why I said sometimes. But the fight happened because he asked ichigo to let him fight, which gives me to understand that the one who was leading the lead was Kurosaki since he was the first to collide with the resistance and not our MC, do you see what I mean ? That's why I say that sometimes it gives me feelings of a secondary character. otherwise the story fascinates me, I hope that my opinion contributes to improve your ideas. thanks

it would be nice if he went alone or with yoruichi. I really like the story, but sometimes I have the feeling that the mc acts as a secondary character, he is always aware of what ichigo and others think ... much emphasis is placed on the progress of kurosaki and company and sincerely I already know his progress and abilities so I don't care too much anymore, but in this story they are secondary characters, they should follow the MC's thoughts and not the other way around, if he is afraid of changing the cannon too much he should not worry because he has the necessary knowledge to don't do it or get it back on track. it's my opinion, greetings and thanks

Nice! Ty for the chap...

yes I read it; that's why the comment was. He was a bully, a nobody who was crippled by the MC, and somehow he crawled, because he wasn't walking! And I'm sure of that!, and it doesn't say anywhere that someone took him to a fucking hydra branch, For revenge, in return they experimented with him to give him super strength and regeneration and apparently he obtained super intelligence and intrigue to **** the MC in this story, that's why I say that he came out of nowhere, after his first fight with his powers he would have to be dead however now seems to be one of the leaders of hydra and above with one of the gems, oh my god!. Come on!... he gave the '****toy' super powers. If they could give powers to such a character indiscriminately they would have already dominated the world ... that's why my disappointment, I like the story and I felt frustrated by this development.

This villain came out of nowhere and is more op than thanos. they would have told him that to achieve his goals he did not need the gems. but to start as a bully and a nobody and it would have been easier. nice way to ruin a good story.

+1.

Am I the only one who thinks he's a bit stupid? It is supposed that he asked for the intelligence and strategic capacity of Light Yagami and at no time did I see it in use, that 'Light' guy would already have to have at least 5 ways to deal with Riser and 1 or 2 to kill him without being suspected as backup, god would even have resolved what he would do with Kokabiel. however just now he seems to realize "draig, riser is strong, he is not going to underestimate me" .... I sincerely feel that he is pathetic. The intelligence that the mc asked to have should grow until reaching or even exceeding his desire, the only thing I see is that he started out being an idiot and reached the cannon being an idiot ... if he hadn't asked to be disgustingly intelligent this story would make sense, but as he asked, so the story doesn't have it ...

I don't understand, he had 220 points and he used only 200 but he spent 220, before something similar happened he had 90 and when using 70 he was left with 0. Please be more careful with that, it is a player's story full of levels and statistics. but otherwise good story, thanks.