SilverIncorperated

SilverIncorperated

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HI

2018-08-04 Beigetreten United States
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SilverIncorperated
SilverIncorperated
1 years ago
Commented

I would say give them to the council. There r currently 5 and u give the soul stone to silk

SilverIncorperated
SilverIncorperated
2 years ago
Commented

I would love to see him start to use body enhancement magic, either blood or normal

SilverIncorperated
SilverIncorperated
SilverIncorperated
3 years ago
Commented

Have this Harry Potter meet Quinn West from HP: A magical journey meet for a chapter. I think it would be really interesting because I dont think ur Harry Potter is using his wizard magic to its full extent

SilverIncorperated
SilverIncorperated
3 years ago
Commented

MORE!!!!!!

SilverIncorperated
SilverIncorperated
4 years ago
Replied to Srinlife

That spreadsheet is crazy

SilverIncorperated
SilverIncorperated
4 years ago
Replied to Srinlife

One solution could be information chapters on links to the spreadsheets that we can view. Honestly, I feel like I would need to re-read this several times to get everything in my head but when you're also reading like 7 other books it gets hard

SilverIncorperated
SilverIncorperated
4 years ago
Posted

Overall a very good and well-made book that could be published. The one issue that I saw at the start was long chapters lead to unstable releases, but the later chapters are shorter making it more viable. It has great development but I feel like there are to make characters and things to keep track of (I don't know how to rectify that now).

SilverIncorperated
SilverIncorperated
4 years ago
Commented

I've already re-read this many times. don't mind doing it again

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SilverIncorperated
SilverIncorperated
4 years ago
Commented

Y dont u make ur posting time later then??

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