TheRealWragan

3yr

Replied to Servant_Ambrosius

Okay that makes more sense. I just thought it was a little sudden.

ch 21 Displaced

The Godslaying Pharaoh

Anime & Comics · Servant_Ambrosius

TheRealWragan

3yr

Commented

To me this chapter doesn't make sense, it came out of absolutely nowhere. This should have been a canon omake.

ch 21 Displaced

The Godslaying Pharaoh

Anime & Comics · Servant_Ambrosius

TheRealWragan

3yr

Commented

You are using way to many hyphens. Hyphens are this -. You didn't need to use any hyphens actually in that entire chapter. Finally, its iron bars not iron fences.

ch 0 1 The Master Necromancer - Chapter 0 - Vol 1

The Master Necromancer

Fantasy · Krizantem

TheRealWragan

3yr

Commented

If the MC is going to leave then what was the while point of Avril? Also, why is the MC the only one with a non-western name?

ch 12 Explosive Flame Heavy Sword, Advanced Knight

Forging The Path To Godliness

Eastern · King Demigod

TheRealWragan

3yr

Posted

This fic is a rare breed. It is a fic that focuses on an "arrogant youngmaster" but he's not actually an arrogant young master. He comes from the highest possible background, and has encountered an MC which he exploits. There has been talk of lower realms that I really want to read about given that the highest cultivation level down there is probably our MCs current cultivation. Other than that the grammar isn't complete trash which is enough for a 5/5 for me. But other than that I would have to tell all of you to give this book a read. It has immense potential and I hope it is chosen.

Scoring the Sacred Body of the Ancients from the Get-go

Eastern · God J

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