I personally would enjoy more if the story was more through the Mc's eyes, thats all. Sorry if i did sound demanding.
That counts as pov change though. I didn't say it only needs to be in Mc's pov, just that it is too many of pov changes. Scene changes as frequent as a tv show just doesn't seem that engaging to me thats all.
There is too many pov changes happening. When watching a show these changes doesn't look confusing but when it is written down just like a tv episode it looks like its all over. I hope you can try more Mc povs and less of other character povs. At this point I don't even know or care for Mc since we didn't get to read about him that much.
Well he and his father has Targaryen bloodline. His father also went there. I take it as a warning from system that can possibly harm him indirectly.
[Kalindor is the only surviving Bloodmage of Valyria, he possesses the knowledge of dragon breeding, he is also a danger to the future of the Targaryen conquest and must be eliminated!]
Book&Literature · RedSage
I would rather read a monotonous writing of only the Mc narrating of what happened than to read these dialogues that is impossible to understand who is talking and when. I didn't expect a writing to be so in chaos.
They captured gang leader easily but than he escaped as easily. We get all that talk about how they can't face the pirates just to be forced to move without horses... It just feels forced.
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I mean there are laws preventing wizards from disclosing their magic to muggles too, isn't there? So, it doesn't really affect anything.
Of course, as the parents of a new student at Hogwarts, they signed a confidentiality agreement with Professor McGonagall on the first day, promising not to tell any non-magical people about the magical world and fulfilling their obligation to keep magic items out of the Muggle world.
Book&Literature · Webnovel_Addicted
The future changed from the day 1 . You can't have 3 dragons and still expect it to play out the same way. That would ruin the story.
Now, she found herself in King's Landing, a lady-in-waiting to Princess Rhaella, the future queen. But she was not blind to the glances Prince Aerys had cast her way during the royal family's visits to Casterly Rock. Aerys had wanted her. She had braced herself for his advances upon her arrival at court. Yet, to her astonishment, Aerys refrained. His glances were no longer filled with desire or lust; they were tinged with regret and pity.
Book&Literature · NobleVillainess
Yeah, but you would at least wouldn't do the criticism in front of matriacrh out of respect for her.
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I think these 2 are different people. Probably a regular release from prison.
Two other inmates were released alongside him, both equally delirious.
HP: Professor From Azkaban
Book&Literature · DontBother