The English is poor with a mix of wrong currency to sport to grammar, with often word in the wrong order. I think it's translated so a lot could be fixed but if someone edited it for the writer. Then i would be the usual overpowered supermodel child, who had the memory's of an adult? (idk it's just not clear) Overall could be an OK story but parts are unreadable.
5th and 12th grade? In England
Left me wanting more. Loved the character, I'm going to see what else the author has written
love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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