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2018-06-10 Beigetreten India
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shankar_k
shankar_k
shankar_k
3 months ago
Posted

The overall story is too good for a foodie 😁. The character design and development is good. Would recommend others to read.

shankar_k
shankar_k
3 months ago
Commented

please don't repeat the paragraph from the previous chapter.

But now the test result hadn't come out yet and the family was already on the verge of breaking points. John Davis was thoroughly frustrated that the other family members didn't seem to see this as something important.

I'll be the Hunter and You're the Prey, Alright?

I'll be the Hunter and You're the Prey, Alright?

Urban · SoraKeith

shankar_k
shankar_k
5 months ago
Posted

Good Story writing, there is soome discontinuation in the chapters, character development is good, some part of the story too vague, fast story ending.

shankar_k
shankar_k
8 months ago
Posted

not immersive at all after the character name changes. until then its good.

shankar_k
shankar_k
1 years ago
Commented

repeat paragraph

Isabel lowered her head, stayed silent for a moment, and then asked, "Percy, when will you have time to look at the contract I gave you?"

Cannot Bear To Let Go Of My Rich Wife

Cannot Bear To Let Go Of My Rich Wife

Urban · Ye Fei Ye

shankar_k
shankar_k
1 years ago
Commented

her

not far away, han yu, the third young master of the han family, looked over and stared at shi yan. his eyes were full of surprise and he asked the person beside him, " "who's that girl beside jiang rui? I don't think I've seen him before."

She Is From The Countryside

She Is From The Countryside

General · Zi Xuan

shankar_k
shankar_k
1 years ago
Commented

he & she - correction needed

this third young master of the yu family was definitely not a simple person, and yan's background was not like what her grandmother had said. yu xi had noticed yan from the moment she arrived, so she had to hold back. if she said yan's full name and the third young master happened to know her, it might cause yan trouble.

She Is From The Countryside

She Is From The Countryside

General · Zi Xuan

shankar_k
shankar_k
1 years ago
Commented

no continuation from the previous chapter

shankar_k
shankar_k
1 years ago
Commented

repeated chapter