is there a update scheduled?
the uzumaki was a sensor technique not a dojutsu even though it has eye in its name. but you are right on there are others than just those 2.
Dan replied, "Unfortunately, the Leaf Village hasn't seen a Wood Release user since the First's time. After Lord First's death, Leaf Village lost its only elemental Kekkei Genkai, but the Leaf Village has the Hyuga and Uchiha clans, who possess the only two ocular Kekkei Genkai in existence."
Naruto: The Medical Shinobi
Anime & Comics · PageTurnerPJ
what are these names of spells are they oc spells or do you justnot care to do a proper translation
+1
8. Harry Potter--
Naruto evolution system
Anime & Comics · legendaryweeb
I just found your book and I don't say this to be mean. But you have a bunch of run on sentence. I think you mean to put periods instead of comas ie instead of (she is running,) you should put it (she is running. ) I just wanted you to know. sorry if this came out rude. I just want to see this book improve because it is interesting.
thanks for the chapter
don't waste your time you can't read it on here . it would be different if they mentioned it in the synopsis but they don't. 1 star
I think the back story is good but I would like to get back to the ncis part soon
why is he troubled isn't it just battle meditation that was used by the jedi?
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original reborn in a world of magic!
what happens when a boy gets reborn in a world of magic? follow ray along his journey through this magical world of swordplay and magic. this is my first story constructive criticism hoped for to improve my writing. help progress the story with your choice. I want this to interact with everyone.7 Chs 11 Sammlungen
i would love to see him make or summon some space Marines so he is not doing everything by himself.
Marvel: Warhammer Simulator
Movies · LORD_INDRA_