Sorry to hear about it, wish you a successful surgery and speedy recovery!
ch 35 Escalation
Video Games · Harry_6224
Please don't explode Aldril. To channel my inner Pippin, he's just your great cousin, on your mother's side, not much to get excited over. Just wait till you meet Aragorn, that one's gonna really screw with your brains [img=nervous].
A feeling of familiarity welled up inside me; it was as if this elf and I were related, adding another unanswered question to the many I had. I was getting tired of this; I felt like I would explode emotionally.
Movies · Ax_nevermay_cry
Thanks for the chapter! Yup, Garrus' dad actually makes a lot of sense, I had a sort of tunnel vision with Victus being my imagined Turian councilor.
ch 61 SIDE STORY – Improbable Alliance
Video Games · Pop0
I'm gonna try to stay away from elves, too many choices there (Finrod, Earendil etc.) I'm gonna go with Hurin, great hero of the Edain, slayer of untold numbers of orcs and trolls. How many men can claim they needed a balrog captain to be captured after tiring out? Plus, I think the guy would deserve a do-over somewhere without any dark gods personally screwing him over, anybody else he can just f@#k up.
Question of the day, which character from the lord of the rings does the game of thrones verse alone? For me it would be a Glorfindel, that elf would even make Sauron run in fear and I say this because I found a comment that Jon Snow beats Aragorn in combat hahaha.
Movies · Ax_nevermay_cry
Nice. But please slow down a bit! Your writing this chapter seems very hurried, and a lot of run-on sentences (I believe you have entire paragraphs by the end of the chapter where you keep throwing details in the same sentence). You're actually losing both clarity and word count (as the simple solution is to split everything into more sentences and paragraphs) doing that. I'd say take and extra day to polish the chapter a bit before publishing, you've got very interesting ideas and I think it's worth the wait if they get fleshed out properly.
ch 34 The First move
Video Games · Harry_6224
Dang! A woman after my own heart
"The Goddess of Wealth doesn't need your faith or soul. All she desires is more wealth!"
Book&Literature · LIl_wretch
'Did I just get 9/11'd by a truck?'
Movies · Vexeras
We sure MC isn't related to Pennywise?
"Do you have dreams? Do you aspire to be renowned? Do you long for thousands of admirers among the ninja world's girls?" Akihiko interrupted Jiraiya's words directly, extending his arms with an impassioned expression, as if embracing a promising future. He gazed at Jiraiya and urged, "If that's what you desire, why hesitate any longer?Join us! Come to Kusagakure! Just sign this document!"
Anime & Comics · Kaiszer
It's definitely got the fire, but does the unit also have the Banderas voice?
"Zorro confirms with GA race now named Geth should be free from enslaved status and in future have a place in the galaxy for our own through metal and coolant we shall persevere through a tumultuous galaxy unit Zorro pledges to Genesis Automata"
Video Games · Harry_6224
Hey, Paul puked when he first saw humans, something about tiny heads, so Javik would definitely not understand, they have just 2 eyes, yuck!
Javik really could not understand Samael's tastes.
Video Games · Pop0
Nice! Thanks for the chapter.
ch 29 A Manipulation
Video Games · Harry_6224
Quarians*
With this done he begins going over the information he has gained access to more information mainly about the world he was stationed above, this dreadnought he was on meant for the research and development of labour forces mainly the consciousness and programs aspect with this improvised space station above the home world of the Qaurians.
Video Games · Harry_6224
*Omni
With me now having going into my own codes and remaking them for more efficiency with my own language with researchers on the physical side non the wiser except a jump in energy usage as I'm using parts that energy to feed into my language so its will defend itself and create more sub programs in where. I can begin to use the knowledge of the ship to further improve myself with me already having broken through on the researchers Omi tools he now carries trace program so when he interfaces with a terminal id be able to get into most if not all systems in the ship.
Video Games · Harry_6224
Nice! Thanks for the chapter!
ch 33 Assainsation attempt.
Book&Literature · Kingoffrogs
Ok, yeah, I think we're going to enjoy this trip! Can't wait to troll Shepard hehe!
"So basically you bragged Infront of machines about your hyper powerful agent and now you swamped with requests for myself that your calling in on me now to get them done, on top of all this I'm to become a rouge intelligence in a new mass effect universe in where the reapers are a thing, is that correct?"
Video Games · Harry_6224
Awwww, I was looking forward to Samael wrestling a Yahg. He already scored a Krogan and a Prothean, gotta catch'em all!
With Tela's path as a guide and with the information he had, Samael was pretty sure he could find the Shadow Broker. He also knew it would not be the same Shadow Broker from Mass Effect 3, as this was a position where the figure changed very fast.
Video Games · Pop0
Awesome, can't wait to see him get confused on how to address people when his relatives start introducing themselves to him.
"Anglachel and Anguirel." He murmured in a trance-like state, as the two blades glowed in resonance at the mention of their names
Movies · Ax_nevermay_cry
No way!
The same scene was happening on other planets, with the Councilours doing the jobs ( surprise!).
Video Games · Pop0
Oh no, this is how it starts, next thing you know the whole Echo Ridge Mine is chasing you cause you forgot about respawns.
"Have extra candle? Trade for iron ore!"
Witcher: The Half Elf
Book&Literature · LIl_wretch