So far the story is going well and I like the whole premise, but if there's one thing I don't like, it's that it seems a bit robotic, and the conversations don't seem very natural. I think everything would be solved if you gave a touch of humanity to your story. I look forward to your next chapter.
Harem or not?
The most amazing fanfic of the walking dead that I have seen, it is entertaining and does not stop too much in fillers, so far I can say that it is my favorite. Please continue with this incredible story and do not discontinue it. 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
Harem?
Becoming the Strongest in Another World With 1Billion Mana Cores.
Fantasy · Archlegion999