AtlasWorld

AtlasWorld

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Novice Writer | English as second language | I love writing stories!

2018-05-06 Beigetreten Philippines
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AtlasWorld
AtlasWorld
1 years ago
Posted

The writing quality is good. Very easy too read and the emotions and world description is very easy to imagine. So far, the story progression has been great! Hoping for more updates in the future! ☺️*Friend Requested a Review

AtlasWorld
AtlasWorld
1 years ago
Posted

Author-nim here! Shameless review but I hope you find the story as grabbing as I wrote it. It was quite a challenge thinking of this story. I always thought of writing something simple and contemporary and this is what I came with. Anyway, enjoy reading Ria and Aleksei's love story. Until then! [img=recommend]

AtlasWorld
AtlasWorld
2 years ago
Replied to Boreas17

Honestly, me too. :')

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AtlasWorld
AtlasWorld
2 years ago
Replied to Boreas17

*spoiler alert... she knew Lara was part witch. she was that one witch Lily was working with when she was looking a method to suppress her daughter's powers when Lara was still small... 😊😄

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AtlasWorld
AtlasWorld
2 years ago
Commented

the writing in this story is...

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Her bare feet squelched into the muddy earth; her hands spread out, feeling the long wiry grass. Her silky white nightgown clung to her body, drenched from the rain that washed away the blood flowing down her arms, dripping to the earth, and trailing behind her. The strong winds bellowed against her, a warning not to take another step as the storm above her raged on. She wanted to scream and curse at the sky with it, but something inside of her had snapped; her body was numb to feeling anything, including the small voice in her head urging her not to do it.

THE FUGITIVE

THE FUGITIVE

Fantasy · Kelly_Starrz

AtlasWorld
AtlasWorld
2 years ago
Replied to Boreas17

Of course! Youre welcome. Thank you so much for the comments. It inspires me very much. Looking forward to your thoughts in the coming chapters as well! :D

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AtlasWorld
AtlasWorld
2 years ago
Replied to Boreas17

Your answers will be revealed in the coming chapters! hehe! Thank you so much for expressing your thoughts about the story through your comments. I always look forward into reading them everyday.

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Lily looked down at her own hands and saw that it was stained with ink from doing her research. She's been spending time with a witch hoping to find the perfect binding spell that would suppress Lara's abilities until she's ready to control it.

Obsidian's Moon

Obsidian's Moon

Fantasy · AtlasWorld

AtlasWorld
AtlasWorld
2 years ago
Replied to Boreas17

Awww! This is why I write stories. To connect and make my readers feel. Immerse themselves in a world I made. I'm glad you like this chapter... I love it too. The efforts i poured into writing this was worth it. :D Looking forward to reading your comments in my next chapters :D

AtlasWorld
AtlasWorld
2 years ago
Replied to emillerdc

I'm glad you liked the chapter update! i hope there's no confusing parts in it. 😅💕

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AtlasWorld
AtlasWorld
2 years ago
Replied to emillerdc

I'm glad you like it! 😊💕

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