rubberDucky

LV 5

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2018-04-28 Beigetreten United States
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Moments 5
rubberDucky
rubberDucky
27 days ago
Commented

What are he doing? = What is he doing?

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Chance in Another World

Chance in Another World

Fantasy · TGThegood

rubberDucky
rubberDucky
2 months ago
Commented

Hmm, something is off with first statement here. Perhaps, re-phrase “..a story a lot of the time.”

"I just try to tell a story a lot of the time. Make something I feel people might resonate with…"

Rise To Stardom

Rise To Stardom

Urban · Caeruleum_

rubberDucky
rubberDucky
2 months ago
Commented

Hannah said He met; "He" should be "she"

" No daddy, I already told you many times, Hannah's father has a restaurant. Let me tell you something amazing. Hannah's older brother, who is not very young, wrote this book. Hannah said He met him in a mansion which was so big she couldn't explore it all and it also had huge statue and and-----" Olivia went on and on about the subject spilling all the beans.

Hollywood Zenith

Hollywood Zenith

Urban · devonsewn

rubberDucky
rubberDucky
2 months ago
Commented

Oscare = Oscar

I went to my room and called Oscare to fetch someone to deliver the manuscript to the Hannah; I also included a handwritten letter to tell her, I will deliver the published one later.

Hollywood Zenith

Hollywood Zenith

Urban · devonsewn

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