DH22

DH22

LV 5

Not sure what to write here? I like to read, eat, and sleep..?? Not necessarily in any of order.

2018-04-26 Beigetreten Canada
Abzeichen 7

Moments 6
DH22
DH22
1 months ago
Commented

Feels like reading machine translation. Make and female are not consistent!

Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen.
Chance in Another World

Chance in Another World

Fantasy · TGThegood

DH22
DH22
3 months ago
Commented

“..drug to and fro..” = dragged

I looked questioningly to Selahe, "We're eating with the mayor tonight." We walked up to the house and knocked on the door. I looked at Fazio, who had been drug to and fro on our shopping trip. I saw how weary Savino and Urgamal, our guards were as well. Having to walk all over the city in heavy chainmail.

The Duke's Prodigy

The Duke's Prodigy

Fantasy · Frapsity

DH22
DH22
3 months ago
Commented

“..as Brad..” = “..and Brad..”

The young man, as of the moment, was laughing heartily with Jasmine as Brad, now aged up again for the scene, sat in the wheel chair Kyle was pushing as he told the duo some of the craziest things his fans had done.

Rise To Stardom

Rise To Stardom

Urban · Caeruleum_

DH22
DH22
3 months ago
Commented

“Worshipping” should be “praying”. Worshipping have a different meaning than praying. Praying to Guanyin is common when asking for safety. Worshipping does not necessary mean to ask/request..

As far as Qing Chen was concerned, worshipping wouldn't put him at a loss anyway.

Naming Technique of the Night

Naming Technique of the Night

Urban · The Speaking Pork Trotter

DH22
DH22
3 months ago
Commented

“..with gravity,..” = phrase here does not make sense with this context. A better phrase maybe “..with a heavy heart,..”?

Then, with gravity, he placed it in front of him and earnestly bowed nine times.

Naming Technique of the Night

Naming Technique of the Night

Urban · The Speaking Pork Trotter

DH22
DH22
3 months ago
Commented

“Face” is not prestige or honor. “Respect” maybe a closer terminology. It’s about personal ego and delusion of others seeing the person with “face” or respect.