apetizer

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2018-04-02 Beigetreten Portugal
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9 months ago
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she only needs to be strong enough, though if its "OP" or "Not OP", i would say "Not OP, but still stong somehow"

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9 months ago
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thank you for the chapter. loosing memories was a great twist, lets see where you take this now! It will be difficult since many of you characters has a lot of "wgat happened in the future" dialog 😅

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10 months ago
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do pardon my english, not native as you can tell 🫠

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10 months ago
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thanks for the chapter!i'll give some opinions/thoughts (that you really dont have to take into consideration, its already good enough!). i'm really enjoying the dynamics here, though i'm getting concerned that it all moves to fast, but hey, its still great!i like shiori, though i'm not sure if there is enough reason for a heartless naruto xD i hoje kakashi can do something about that. (i am not saying i would like to see a kind naruto either).I understand Shiori wanting to make a lot of things since she is getting rich, but from my perspective, would everyone just want to follow a kid on big investments? Did she show proof of being able to handle money and investments?well, does this all manter at all? not at all, I just think sometimes Some decisions seem too easelly done and maybe a paragraph or a chapter trying to explain Some plans better would captivate more readers .keep up with the good work, will keep reading regardless, you good me hooked either way 😁

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10 months ago
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Thank you for the chapter 😄

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2 years ago
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How come there was no cliffhanger???

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3 years ago
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Yurial woul be the friend for times like this... But well Nalrond it is

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3 years ago
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola