Dark_Pot

A semblance of a broken romance at first. And at some point romance is there, albeit subdued. In any case, I assure you it's nothing forced. Just like in real life, it even comes all natural!

don't mind this one. Now, to get on with my shameless review/advertisement, I write this to roughly break down the story. This is about a creature, Thoth, ancient as hell and totally oblivious about parenting who, for some inexplicable reason, has been bound to a youth. With the essence, fuel of the soul, entwined, there is no escape. Circumstances that are especially daunting for someone freshly out of prison. Notwithstanding the many years of experience granted by an immortal life, Thoth is sure to fall into every fallacy imaginable, tearing out his scales when confronted with a new strange situation. Yet that alone is not all to the novel. I made an effort to flesh out the world as interactive as possible. There, things move on their own, not waiting for Thoth at all. Humans will label him a rebel out of nowhere, his own creations embark on the warpath against the creator, elves shoot themselves in the foot willingly, dragons piss him off and much more... all because he simply exists. Read how he handles the issues one by one, displaying incredibly forced level-headedness. This is not about senseless slaughter, not about an incredibly shallow protagonist, overpowered to no end, and not about continuous action. It is about a journey, arduous, everlasting and real. Has this garnered your interest? Then read on as much as you like. Comments are welcome and reviews valuable feedback teaching me how to be a better author.

Thank you very much for this marvellous review. You are very welcome to comment on my chapters as much as you like. I just don't respond at times due to time issues, apologies.